Engagement Day! Poem by anju addanki

Engagement Day!

Rating: 5.0


As came the dawn,
I was carried to the lawn,
And in my hubbys arms I was found,
Love was all just around.
Sitting in his lap,
And in his arms I was wrapped,
Carresing and kissing,
There was nothing that was missing,
And he said this is just not done,
As the best is yet to come,
Then I heard my favourite music flow,
And lots of balloons blow,
Then I see my husband kneeling,
And I had a young girls feelings,
As the ring slided in my hand,
And in his arms I land,
And I heard
Now you are mine again,
And then we flew to the memories of engagement lane.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nikunj Sharma 01 December 2009

wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwoooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwww.a nice poem depicting small movements, small things that matter and the feelings that emerge out of them...........

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Kranthi Pothineni 01 December 2009

Very nice and the perfect choice of your wording made this write beautiful. Lovely composition and penned eloquently. Happy to read it.10 on 10

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Dr.subhendu Kar 01 December 2009

passionately fascinating, ingeniously eloquent flow of words by the scintillation of situation yet coming back the memory lane of engagement day, utterly musing,10++, thanks for sharing

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Emma Kessler 11 December 2009

Wonderful poem, very sweet. Thank you for your comments on my poems.

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Ency Bearis 11 December 2009

awesome poem...a passionate one...nice to read......10

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Indira Babbellapati 05 December 2009

re-living the best moments in life can infuse freshness into life...

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Ravi Sathasivam 01 December 2009

Very romantic and cute poem. Very passionate too. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me 10+

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 01 December 2009

a really cute poem, very passionate, and i loved read it.....

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