Linda Ori

Rookie - 189 Points (08/13/1945 / UTAH)

! Enlighten Me, Please - Poem by Linda Ori

How exactly did this happen?

You come to me after all this time
Ripe with emotion and passion -
The universe explodes with wonder
We are infused with its magic;

No need for words any longer
There are no words, only sensation
Caught up in the splendor of the moment -
Primal need, hunger, lust.........love?

You read my mind with your body
We need only to act and react
Souls connecting with every breath
You breathe me in;

No longer two separate entities
Together we flow into one
Pleasure and passion now double
Energies fused in the fire.

Can you explain this phenomenon?
This thing that you do to my soul
I'm wondering how did this happen.................
Enlighten me, please.

7/3/2008


Comments about ! Enlighten Me, Please by Linda Ori

  • (8/6/2009 4:22:00 AM)


    This is a very passionate write indeed..
    Hey this is a work of a true poet.....
    I don't have that much experience so I m not in a position to enlighten you Linda..
    Yet there has to be that chemistry isn't it? .. this is a very nice write..
    I enjoyed this one.. good one to relax my mind..

    with love
    shan
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  • Meggie Gultiano (11/16/2008 3:29:00 AM)


    yes, and i agree with Ivan.Thanks for this sharing.
    Love,
    Meggie
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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (9/20/2008 2:43:00 PM)


    ...astonishing thoughts/verse beautifully expressed.........10 (Report) Reply

  • (7/13/2008 12:00:00 PM)


    If the time is right and the chemistry is right you have no choice Nature takes control (Report) Reply

  • (7/12/2008 3:59:00 PM)


    This one is a focused in topic. That is always good. Prose writing has a
    way of taking your focus and altering it. You have to keep bringing it back.
    I thought you did that well. I never lost the track.

    GW62
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  • (7/8/2008 8:14:00 AM)


    i just read tai's poem about the same subject...looks like alot of women on here are losing control to a special someone...nice writing your quite the poet (Report) Reply

  • (7/6/2008 1:10:00 AM)


    It's the chemistry my dear lucky lady! lol Great write, I know these feelings well and nothing but how you describ it, is good enough for Tai, It just doesn't happen without really wide eyes! lol Thanks for this great lift into another wet sunday in Blighty (Report) Reply

  • (7/5/2008 1:09:00 AM)


    My friend its simply part of the human condition! (Report) Reply

  • (7/3/2008 5:43:00 PM)


    Great read Linda! You certainly have explained love, its all there written, in your
    Poem above! ! *10*! !
    Best wishes!
    Friend Thad
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  • (7/3/2008 3:23:00 AM)


    But L, we rely on YOU to enlighten us; and you have.

    That old cliche about two people not even needing to speak because they knew what each other is thinking and feeling.... some find it tedious... I find it beautiful. t x
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  • (7/3/2008 1:44:00 AM)


    'No longer two separate entities
    Together we flow into one...'
    sincere love, glorified here...good enjoyable write, linda...
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  • (7/3/2008 1:26:00 AM)


    I'm glad I read this. Very good (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 3, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, September 20, 2008


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