Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Gold Star - 21,478 Points (July 12,1952 / New York City)

Enlightenment Haiku - Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Lightning strikes deeply

storming the inner core roots

changing the tree's shape


Comments about Enlightenment Haiku by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

  • Mamta Agarwal (11/5/2008 6:01:00 AM)

    enlightenment couldn't have been better expressed 10 when you get enlightenment, you are a changed person.

    Mamta
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  • Reshma Ramesh (10/28/2008 12:59:00 PM)

    perfect...........need i say more.......... (Report)Reply

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  • Chitra - (9/23/2008 11:36:00 AM)

    A prolific write, the tree of life being shaped by the lightning of ups and downs (Report)Reply

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  • Dr.Wardha Jawdat (9/22/2008 12:02:00 PM)

    the think with haiku is its so difficult to make it profound and succint at the same time...this piece is a perfect example of how it can be done.excellent! (Report)Reply

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  • Monika Marie (9/15/2008 9:33:00 AM)

    Perfectly put. And how this can relates to mankind/life is even more perfectly composed. Very nice. (Report)Reply

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  • Sadiqullah KhanSadiqullah Khan (9/10/2008 12:09:00 AM)

    no doubt, , , , , , , , , thanx (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 9, 2008



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