Entreaty Poem by Chandrashekar a posy poet

Entreaty

Rating: 5.0


O my svelte lass
Yearn to touch
Your lustrous feet
And wish to pass through
Your radiant skin
On winter's dawn

O my portrait of heaven
Crave to swallow
Your warmest breathe
And wish to follow
Your pleasant odor
on twilight's delight

O my paradise of planet
Eager to feel
Your sway of silky hair
And wish to mislay
The seductive argument
On full moon night

O my queen of dreams
Dream to embrace
Your pristine soul
And wish to entwine
with your tempting contour
And be enthralled!

Wednesday, September 9, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: planet
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 14 September 2009

lovely poem filled by love 10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 14 September 2009

Love, beauty and peace prevail throughout this wonderful poem.......10/10.

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rago rago 14 September 2009

very fine indeed and beautiful.................

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Chitra - 12 September 2009

expressions of fine calibre...enjoyed reading this poem

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Seema Aarella 10 September 2009

Any damsel wrought of beauty and love.....would not turn down this passionate plea.....is these words or your heart laid bare! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Wonderful write!

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Patti Masterman 16 September 2009

Lots of nice imagery and sensation intermingled.

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Reshma Ramesh 16 September 2009

awe...........this is such a beautiful, magical write.......well done

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Catrina Heart 15 September 2009

a great soothing pieces...wonderful imagery used......loved it!

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Sandhya S N 14 September 2009

love packed stanzas... well written regards sandhya

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Indira Babbellapati 14 September 2009

very very soothing to read...

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