Cool caressing breeze of the high mountains,
Cuddles my body like the gushing water of the fountains,
Embracing my mind with gentle elements,
Enveloping my thoughts with sweet sentiments,
Beseeching me to recognise soul's magical fragrance,
Bestowing me with a spirit of matchless benevolence.
All these lines in this poem composed by you on " Cool Caressing Breeze" are fascinating and much impressive. I appreciate this poem. Thank you very much for sharing this poem.
Explicit beautiful composition. Indeed the cool breeze that makes us feel good all the time. Beautiful notion and beautiful presentation. Good work.
It's so beautiful. The images created by the poem can easily surpass the image created by the picture gives joy and coolness to the eyes. But the words of the poem and the subtle expression takes us- the readers- to another world. Thanks, Geeta ji, for this marvelous masterpiece. This goes into MyPoemList.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Brilliant and elegant piece.....thank u, dear poetess...