~ EPITAPOETRY ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
February 6,2009.
WELL, SHE CAN’'T SAY...
CAN....GUESS...?
BUT WILL BE...
WHAT...?
STILL WITH A BUT...!
SHE IS MELTING...
LIKE DICHOTOMUS CANDLE...
THE OFT DESTINY...
OF AN UNSUNG...
WHO’S COPULSION...
STAY UNKNOWN...
POETRY IN BREAST...
LOOKING FOR A ‘LOVE WOMB’...
TO BE EMBRYOED AGAIN...
TO GET A CARE OF MOTHER...
FOR HER LOVE...POETRY…
LONG AND LONG...
WHO WILL SORROUGATE HER…
'LOVE WOMB'...? ?
UNENDINGLY...
CEASELESSLY...
LIKE EV’R FLOWING RIVER...
BUT NOT IN HEART...
HEATRS ARE…
WORDLESS…
TRUSTLESS...
HUMURLESS...
PARCHED SAND...
WHY...? ? ?
SHE CARES NOT TO KNOW…!
LO! EMBRYOD…! !
WHERE E’ER CONVERSING…
ARGUMENTATING SOLLIQUIZING …
WITH CONSCIOUS SUBCONSCIOUS…
ON FUTILITY UTILITY FUTURE …
OR EPITAPH OF POETRY…?
BYTES AFTER BYTES…
NIGHTS AFTER NIGHTS…
FINALLY POETRY CEDED …
WALKOVER MINUS STOPOV’R…
TO EPHITAP…
UNDECIDED LAST LINE…
'EV’RUNBORN EPITAPOETRY'
BYTES AFTER BYTES…
NIGHTS AFTER NIGHTS…!
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niv, you take a bold venture every time you pen a poem, I appreciate your honesty in your work. Your poem questions the life of poetry....'poetry in breast looking for a 'love womb' to be embryoed again. Great job this poem deserved a 10+++[ altho many times my votes do not register on PH, still, you get my vote verbally]
Indeed we’re at a cross-road and fingers are crossed Simplicity in thought, unalloyed feelings, unblemished emotion and over all concocted well tailored interpersonal reaction… We forgot to laugh full chested full of vertical or horizontal forehead creases We’re after what we don’t know except effortless bucks without professionalism Where we’re leading us to this question Poet has raised HEATRS ARE… /WORDLESS…/TRUSTLESS.../HUMURLESS... /PARCHED SAND.../WHY...? ? ? This why we’ve to find out like Poet we’re [believer of morale –vide above] leading us where or no where This is my 2nd contemplative comment as I feel necessary to place before all walks of life… Thanks all for patience reading
Poetry well designed with satire in question HEATRS ARE… /WORDLESS…/TRUSTLESS.../HUMURLESS... /PARCHED SAND.../WHY...? ? ? Climaxed in UNDECIDED LAST LINE… /'EV’RUNBORN EPITAPOETRY' /BYTES AFTER BYTES…/NIGHTS AFTER NIGHTS…! Is it a subtle message of low readers’ interests to poetry of low quality poetries Indeed dwindling vibes of finer aesthetics are concern for poets and awakened readers. 10++
She is melting... Like dichotomous Candle... superb expression... Skillfully assembled feelings with word...your poems reverberate and cling those magnified aspect that only few poet adhere... Profound work.10+++
Juggled with words..... more to the ..... light & shade! ! !
You have a grasp over language which should be admired. Unique style!
the first thought that sprung to mind was a crying baby.
BUT NOT IN HEART... HEATRS ARE… WORDLESS… TRUSTLESS... HUMURLESS... PARCHED SAND... WHY...? ? ? SHE CARES NOT TO KNOW…! Different style for you, I love this exchange of words. Great write which really makes one think about what you say. Thanks for sharing.
Epitapoetry is stylistic expression rendered in form. So many styles play upon poets for poetic expression. 'Mourn Needless Loss' is the stillborn poems not written. Therefore my comment will be a poem in choice mood read into it as the will or muse moves... Cosmic Candles Wax Poetic mind melt into sensation quickening energy elastic restless vibrations explode flow river streams waves seas engulf swallow id ego current tossed womb liquid warmth dark surge wordless muse exists saturated image void bio bytes expand shape form breach conception irk rise fall thought codes case uni-language mainstreams heartbeats rebirth melting poetics birth verse renewal word script life lit flickers Copyright © Terence George Craddock
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Like Ms. Nivedita all poets are concerned about hearts are ‘Wordless’ ‘Trustless’ ‘Parched’ becoming why? Who’ll write Epitapoetry? A challenging job …new style and concept… Dr. V.