~ Eve Niv ~ - Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

Keep in
Bosoms’ sleeve
Your Eve Niv.

Eve Niv
Many looks -
Smart Street n’ Hip Hop
Cute n’ Tip Top
Vintage n’ Trendy
Blossoming BrunetteBlondie
Ethnic n’ Debonair
O’ Beaut connoisseur
Come-on to allure
Assure I’ll be your.

Says Eve Niv
Hush why?
Flush stale shy.

Will salve
Yours grieve
It’s Eve Niv.

Eve Niv
Souses positive
Sucks negative.

Loving lulu
Diva div
Your Eve Niv.

Eve Niv
With love leafage
Design her n’ weave.

Eve Niv
By grit n’ dash
Palpate the panache.

Phew n’ quip
Fie qui vive
I Eve Niv.

Me Eve Niv
Heady companion
Blatant bohemian.

View n’ accost
She is zombie
Harbor her freespree.

Blotto beaut
Heaving romance robe
Dipdouse in trove
Of Eve Niv.

Eve Niv
Osculate your dearie
Tipsy toppie toffee
Licklap gusto in
Sloshed smoochsmoothie.
Your hottie
Eve Niv
Don’t cleave
In dame Eve Niv
Venturously dare to live.

Comments about ~ Eve Niv ~ by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

  • So Close (9/27/2012 9:06:00 PM)

    really excellent lines...fantastic work hands off...

    »so close«
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  • Louis Cecile (10/27/2011 2:33:00 AM)

    Excellent use of language and metaphors. The hypnotic use of Eve Niv keeps it on ones mind. (Report) Reply

  • Ebi Robert (7/15/2011 7:20:00 AM)

    Your diction is hidden from my eyes. But I think you are a substance. (Report) Reply

  • (11/28/2010 10:35:00 PM)

    A great poem in your own inimitable style! Some may feel it a little difficult to understand the real significance. (Report) Reply

  • (11/27/2010 8:21:00 PM)

    Again a great poem full of wisdom and depth. Another feather to your cap. Innovative and vivid.
    A thought provoking write.
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  • Seyyed Bagher Mirshojaee (11/21/2010 1:51:00 PM)

    In this poem all the poetic devices, performance and endeavors are at the service of the poet's meaning. I think the choice of Eve is very important to find this work more beautiful. But the poet tried to tell us a story of these days using the images of these days and mixing it with the story of the creation. In this poem the personality of the poet as a woman is completely manifested and the poet shows her pride and power as a woman and I think it is what all women need to have about themselves.
    The diction of this poem like other poems of Nivedita is wonderful and she follows her own style of writing poems.
    Thanks for sharing and hope more success in your poetic endeavor.
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  • (11/20/2010 1:22:00 PM)

    From : Sisirachandra Vaduge (Badulla Sri Lanka; Male; 44)
    To : Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
    Date Time : 11/11/2010 10: 56: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject : poem Eve ~ Niv

    Best wishes your poem eveniv is an exceptional poem that I have ever read, it seems sentimental pains and experiences of this bougsostic society and it's[human]inhibitants actions and reactions for sentiments and romance estimated by materials and changing fashions however still I feel difficult to understand if it is it please if any thing wrong or misplet guisde me to understand them too.
    regards sisira c, v, from srilanka.
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  • (11/17/2010 10:39:00 AM)

    excellent poem, good rhythm and conveying best message. god bless u.10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Bert Bell (10/18/2010 12:46:00 AM)

    I like this poem, Niv. I don’t read it as being intrinsically about you so much as it is a suggestion to others on how to keep their love relationships fresh and exciting by giving them variety in their relationship experiences with one another. It’s very good. (Report) Reply

  • Dwi Utami (10/15/2010 6:13:00 AM)

    Wooow..this is my third comment in your poetry EVE NIV.
    what else should i'say.
    Poetry is expression of the heart
    possibly never feel the pain if it would be difficult to write poetry full of tears.
    How i'could write poetry like your poetry joyful.
    Because my heart is always cloudy.
    You are nice poet keep always in fun 10/10
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  • (10/8/2010 11:15:00 PM)

    Absolute joy to read, so musical as the words jumped off the page. Kind of reminded me almost of a retro 60's feel. I have to say you have such a control of words that mesmerizes your readers. Great write. (Report) Reply

  • (8/29/2010 7:34:00 PM)

    Smart Street n’ Hip Hop
    Cute n’ Tip Top
    Vintage n’ Trendy
    Blossoming BrunetteBlondie

    Your a Blossoming Brunette Blondie with a heartfelt appeal to men to love for real :) A street smart positive woman with an agenda of needed love care consideration for all. And when we dropp the attitudes masks walls of indifference and try a little kindness love hope the world around us blossoms for all. Love is still 'All We Need' :)
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  • Pranab K Chakraborty (8/26/2010 8:13:00 AM)

    Universal goodness reflects the whole of conjugal journey. EVE NIV is the personification simply of an idea....not a person. Thank you for crafting unreal to taste it through the real form of words with rhythm.

    10 again
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  • (8/20/2010 1:53:00 AM)

    a pleasure to read i found pleasant music in this poem......and i used the dictionary too so plz plz write with hard language to let me learn MS.Niv =) ....haha i love your poetry! ! ! !
    thanks for sharing
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  • Dwi Utami (8/18/2010 7:58:00 PM)

    He miss your poetry was good for the verse to two that was the love not at random love, because i'did not know with the train of thought every poets, when wrote the poem was the contents from the head, about what he think and i'knew how your thoughts were wrote something simple but that made different only his words that was full of riddle made me turned the brain continued.
    Good of you 10/10
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  • Miroslava Odalovic (8/18/2010 4:54:00 PM)

    It spreads my smyle, you wrap your I AM into the most tender language to appeal to others to start loving themselves IMMEDIATELY. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • (8/10/2010 9:12:00 AM)

    I love this poem. I personally believe, we have to love ourselves for others to love us. By then taking it one step forward means speaking out about how beautiful we as peoples are and thats where this poem makes it for me. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Dwi Utami (8/9/2010 4:58:00 PM)

    I liked the first verse from this poem to sell the woman and about global birds afterwards in coloured with very good composition chemistry.
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  • Unwritten Soul (8/2/2010 6:14:00 AM)

    you are good painter of life, your words never fail to draw reality onto a canvas of life...
    you not use a visible color but tangible feeling to your painting, that's make it valuable...
    most of your poem just like the 'Picasso drawing in form of poem'...10, enjoyable to read
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  • (7/30/2010 9:15:00 AM)

    I've been married 51years.. Many ups and downs. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 4, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, January 27, 2012

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