Wednesday, October 4, 2023

Essence Comments

Rating: 5.0

When Jack said that he hated the world
But its essence, I felt his pain
Even more so, now
I felt when I am inside too
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Indira Renganathan 07 October 2023

Indeed to be good for a good social cause is our duty...well crafted...liked

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Kingsley Egbukole 05 October 2023

With conflicts man destroys both nature and what he built. Nicely scripted

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Nabakishore Dash 05 October 2023

Hoping we realize-------essence is gone. A great warning in very excellent words to the humanity.Alas we never realize.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 October 2023

A very heartfelt write that many of us can relate thereto. Very touching.

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Richard Wlodarski 04 October 2023

A painfully GOOD poem, LeeAnn! Nice nod to Kerouac! We can only pray to God that we never lose sight of the essence.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 October 2023

A wonderful poem. Well penned dear poetess LeeAnn.5 stars*****

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Kingsley Egbukole 04 October 2023

Human beings are part of the societal problems by our activities. Well captured

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Sandra Feldman 04 October 2023

Yes, we did all this. A tragedy, so well summarized, But is it too late now to correct it or stop it? A poem with great, good intentions.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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