Eternity Of Silence Poem by Marieta Maglas

Eternity Of Silence

Rating: 4.9


The wings were struggling
On a leaden sky,
Distorting the space and time
Sinusoidally...

The eternity of silence,
Was dividing my morbidity,
It was separating the flight
From oblivion.

I needed to escape
From the illusion, that absorbs everything
And from the disillusionment, that digest all....

So, give me your warm hand.
I know, it is the hand of a man.
My fingers will touch you
And I will kiss your silence.

You can give me the strength
To continue
The great symphony of life.

Poem by Marieta Maglas

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abigail Roscoe 30 September 2009

Very goog imagery, metaphor................

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Agnes Parker 02 October 2009

This is a touching and great poem....................

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Anand Madhukar 13 October 2009

A beautifully written piece.10 without doubt.

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Marieta Maglas 20 October 2009

From: Dona Lil Antonio (Manila Philippines; Female; 29) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 10/19/2009 12: 19: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: hi ive gone through your poems they were all awesome and written in deep feelings. keep writing and keep inspiring others to make good crafts as well.

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Indira Renganathan 23 October 2009

The great symphony of life....you've very rightly said it....nice reading....thank you

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Congratulations, dear poet Ms Maglas. This poem is listed at #30 among the Best Poems of Members, featured on PoemHunter. Well done

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Iron Panda 23™ 04 March 2010

10/10 is just the beginning of my vote xP 230000000++++

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Rayan Ali 04 December 2009

silence is the best answer to every question..a very nice poem!

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Steve Wilkeson 16 November 2009

silence seems to be the answer..... 10

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Yacov Mitchenko 11 November 2009

In everyday life, we're often confused; life makes many demands on us; we generally live superficially, under the spell of may illusions. But love and the silence of which you speak give us the strength to keep going and attain to glimpses of the divine. Good poem. If you have time, please read 'Dante and His Three Beatrices' and 'The Epileptic Fit'.

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Marieta Maglas

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Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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