Kristin Nicole RothDavis

Rookie (August 28,1976 / Southern Oklahoma... )

Ever~lasting Love - Poem by Kristin Nicole RothDavis

Birds singing in perfect harmony,
Cottonwood blossoms gracefully flowing,
The breeze gently carresses her neckline
Blowing soft kisses, reminding her of last time.
A rush of excitement brushes down her silkend spine.

Children's laughter off to the far side,
Dogs chasing frisbees in the open fields wide,
He glances swiftly as he notices another
Rare form of true beauty,
He reaches out to take her hand,
As she dances to the sound of nature's sweet band.

Everything comes to a brief halt,
They both contiously wonder if it's their fault.
She notices him as he aproaches,
Both hearts a' racing, their distance grows nearer.

Silence wasn't meant to be mistaken,
For it was loud and clearer,
They'd met before, who would ever believe,
Their passion instantly was a'glow,
Some would say she even had a halo.

As the years came and went,
So many special memories spent,
A love so pure, many will endure,
The day they both passed away the sky was
Filled with doves dancing,
People smiling in awe while glancing.

The sun glimmered brightly a'top the clouds,
Sunkissed rays made a transparent glow,
An image so rare and beautiful,
Some would swear the doves carried away her halo.


Comments about Ever~lasting Love by Kristin Nicole RothDavis

  • (7/9/2006 11:58:00 AM)

    How beautifully you combined the natures splendor and their love!
    A fine write!

    Preets
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  • (6/20/2006 4:31:00 AM)

    Sunkissed rays made a transparent glow,
    An image so rare and beautiful,
    Some.....

    this is one of great poetry.....
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  • (6/18/2006 5:48:00 PM)

    Doves, halos and so on. My favourite words Kristin. I love Doves. If youve read my poems you probably can tell.Another 10/10.xxxxx (Report)Reply

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  • (6/18/2006 7:35:00 AM)

    Splendid read! Your imagery divine!

    Patricia Gale
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (5/29/2006 12:59:00 PM)

    KRIS... KNOW I READ THIS ONE LAST WEEK, BUT WAS CHECKING FOR SOME NEW WORK, & WOUND UP ENJOYING A VERY GOOD OLD WORK....
    TIS ONE OF MY FAVOURITES OF YOURS, TIS ALL...'''''''''''FRANK
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (5/26/2006 2:16:00 PM)

    KRIS...THY TALENT DOTH LEND THINE HEART O' EMBER OV' WARMTH...
    AN' FO' YE LASSIE OV TH' KINDLED VERSE...O'10 FO' PERFECTION! FRANK
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 26, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, July 30, 2010


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