Every Moment I Live With You Poem by Ojaswi Kaushal

Every Moment I Live With You

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Every moment i live with an eternal flame that adorns my soul with ineffable bliss, The apex enchantment for a mortal man.

Every moment I hear rhapsodic undulations of her omnipotent voice. infallible arrows of her emphatic prattle pierce my soul millions of time. Her subtle voice still dwells deep down I swear.

Every moment i perceive her aesthetic face
resplendent with mesmerizing eyes that endure profoundly compassionate innocence and luscious lips proliferating an inscrutable simile.


Every moment I sleep with her voluptuous presence embraced in my virile arms and I keep caressing tresses of her ravishingly titillating hair until I fall asleep.

Every moment I try to nab a glimpse of her nubile palms, in each fold and line of which was written every aspect of someone's destiny.

Every moment I scold myself for making same mistakes again and again and Every time I find myself helpless against the majestic prowess of her interminable benevolent influence. Her divine trance still enthralls my immortal soul.

Every moment I keep writing poems for her. But every time I condemn the almighty that made me so un expressive.but the next moment I felicitate the almighty as with the grace of whom Every moment The Eternal Flame Enlightens my abode.

And every moment I live with you.

[ Ojaswi Kaushal ]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vincent Kuo 11 May 2012

Profound though abstract. I suppose anyone in any state of commitment can relate to this poem deeply. Even when you're not with her in body, you live with her in heart and soul forever. Wonderful poem!

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Jennifer Chalk 10 May 2012

What a beautiful poem and sentiment - every moment I live with you. I love it!

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Dark Infinity 19 May 2012

Very excellent writing. Love your diverse use of words

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Ernesto Torres 12 May 2012

very nice i like the vocabulary used you should write more

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Mohd Shujaath Ali 12 May 2012

Nice poem excelant way of expression good vocabulary used

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Tom Allport 08 July 2022

A lovely write of the emotions felt in each living momemt!

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Babatunde Aremu 11 March 2013

Keep writing. There is room for improvement

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James Cecil 05 January 2013

You should discard your thausarus. Your writing is like a carricature; an exaggeration, rather like an unskilled plastic surgeon' s work.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 01 November 2012

SO perfect and nice keep up writing great works

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Neela Nath Das 06 October 2012

A wonderful poem.Write more.

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