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Every Moment I Live With You

Rating: 4.0
Every moment i live with an eternal flame that adorns my soul with ineffable bliss, The apex enchantment for a mortal man.

Every moment I hear rhapsodic undulations of her omnipotent voice. infallible arrows of her emphatic prattle pierce my soul millions of time. Her subtle voice still dwells deep down I swear.

Every moment i perceive her aesthetic face
resplendent with mesmerizing eyes that endure profoundly compassionate innocence and luscious lips proliferating an inscrutable simile.

Every moment I sleep with her voluptuous presence embraced in my virile arms and I keep caressing tresses of her ravishingly titillating hair until I fall asleep.
Every moment I try to nab a glimpse of her nubile palms, in each fold and line of which was written every aspect of someone's destiny.
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Babatunde Aremu 11 March 2013
Keep writing. There is room for improvement
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James Cecil 05 January 2013
You should discard your thausarus. Your writing is like a carricature; an exaggeration, rather like an unskilled plastic surgeon' s work.
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Ellias Anderson Jr. 01 November 2012
SO perfect and nice keep up writing great works
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Neela Nath Das 06 October 2012
A wonderful poem.Write more.
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Corrina Kavea 07 July 2012
I don't think, i have read a better poem beautiful!
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Corrina Kavea 07 July 2012
un expressive? if that was un expressive than, my poetry is dead. Very romantic and concise makes me warm and tingly inside. I fell in love with the poet.
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Unwritten Soul 20 June 2012
The end just sweet and the whole poem was all out, very detail and done in layers of beautiful texture, it was nice one, should to write more poem_Unwritten Soul
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Marilyn George 24 May 2012
To impart that level of emotion - passion, desire, respect and perhaps a seemingly obsessional love? A gorgeous poem!
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Blossom Mist 24 May 2012
Her divine trance still enthralls my immortal soul..........Brilliant Lovely flow of thoughts! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! gr8 job! ! ! ! ! !
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Ramdas Bhandarkar 20 May 2012
fantastic one! Effective vocabulary and free flow of thoughts
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