Abdallah Gamal

Rookie - 343 Points (8/June/1995 / Egypt)

Everyone Wanna Be The Best, But He/She Can'T Even Try At Least - Poem by Abdallah Gamal

I wanna be a good person, so everyone will love me,
so my dad says that's my son, so everyone will point at me,
saying: 'He's the bright moon, he has the perfect beauty,
he has the eyes of the sun, who is that angel could be.'.

I wanna be good, just for the people say he's a good person.
However if that all I wanted, so what's the point of what I've done? !
So all of that wasn't faithfully to Allah, and at last I haven't won
The Medal Of Honour, so everything I dreamt about has gone.

No, not everything has gone, I still have Allah in my life.
I've just woke up, and I'm coming to continue my strife.
My vision has returned to me, so nothing will change my belief even the knife.
I don't care anymore about getting a new car or a perfect wife.
All what I care about is to put the Heaven on my way, and forget the prelife.
Now I feel the faith in me, I feel that mercy of Allah upon me is rife.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Today we're talking about a serious problem, that isn't even in me, it's in most of the humans, is by being proud of doing good things for humanity, animals, or plants, as if no one gave them the ability and gave His mercy upon them to do these good things, all what they do is for getting popularity, and be loved by all the people, forgetting the Lord of all creatures, all these good things we do are not a gift we give, it's a gift given to us from Allah The Merciful to get rid of our sins, to restore our vision, to know that no one is given that gift except those who were chosen from Allah, and they are not chosen cuz they're good, no, they're chosen cuz Allah give them another chance to return to reality, don't say I'll be good tom. tom. is not coming you've today, no one knows how long he's destined to be alive, so we've to work for days and night faithfully to Allah, we all wanna be in Heaven, but Heaven is for who deserve it, not for the dreamers or the lazy. Hurry up my lovely friends, the race to Heaven is still too far, and time is running up, my wish is to be chosen all to be in Heaven, but only who desrve it. Love you all :)

Comments about Everyone Wanna Be The Best, But He/She Can'T Even Try At Least by Abdallah Gamal

  • Nishi Kumari (12/31/2014 6:44:00 AM)

    nice poem...honest feelings about the Almighty.... (Report) Reply

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  • Leslie Sharp (10/9/2014 9:34:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem, keep on believing in y our Lord don't let no one stand in the way of what you believe is right. In the end all that we have require on earth will surly stay on earth. But are faith no matter how or were we go will remain ours and no one can change what is meant to be! I have one comment I wouldn't give up finding that
    perfect wife, they say the women is the backbone of a strong man. May Mercy be on our side
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  • Ahmed Abomahfouz (2/11/2014 2:44:00 AM)

    i liked this sufist honest feelings. philosophy of companion only with Allah..great work (Report) Reply

  • Zandile Zoya (8/19/2013 7:26:00 AM)

    am speechless! just keep on writting and i will keep on reading (Report) Reply

  • Cierrah Smiles (9/2/2012 11:59:00 PM)

    I love how you put your beliefs in your writing and your not afraid of what others think about it.... I like this poem a lot=) (Report) Reply

  • (9/1/2012 7:25:00 AM)

    if there is one thing i love about you, its the way you attribute Allah in everything....keep writing... (Report) Reply

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  • (8/29/2012 6:59:00 AM)

    I think it sounds really free spirited. It's good. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (8/27/2012 7:05:00 AM)

    Abdallah, you are an excellent writer. You have the gift of expression. your outlook on life is great, and always persue your dreams. You goodness will be richly rewarded someday in heaven. The heart of the poet has spoken. Keep writing and expressing yourself. happiness forver Heather Burns (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (8/26/2012 3:09:00 PM)

    Speechless! Clearly you have filtered your strong faith and commitment in trying to reach your ultimate goal! We cannot concentrate in public opinion since actions talk louder than words as they say but nevertheless one must freely express what is hidden in the heart and mind before one goes crazy and do things like those who are going around killing and hurting innocent people! Faith and positive thinking keep you flowing smoothly and peaceful! Excellent write my friend! Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-New York City http: //www.romeodellavalle.com (Report) Reply

  • Eindaray Kyaw (8/26/2012 11:35:00 AM)

    this poem can apparently highlight your strong mind and religious creed! Wonderful pen! ! (Report) Reply

  • (8/23/2012 10:22:00 PM)

    I'm not religious, but I think you're right in the fact that people who do good things shouldn't do them to look good and feel proud; they should do them simply because they are good and right. People who do 'good' things to look good aren't truly good at all, they are show-offs. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (8/23/2012 4:05:00 AM)

    The best shine is when it comes from heart, do best not because of complement but it surely make u calm and happy when you do it sincerely....and I know your eyes is round like moon shape..to share the warm light to who want to see...in this poem you inspire us a lot, a worth to wait poem...a hope in hopelessness, a gem among the sands..keep it up _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 23, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 23, 2012

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