Patricia Gale


Exhilaration - Poem by Patricia Gale

Pressing down
Thrusting down
Hand gripped tight
Downwards
Upwards
Then down, and then up again

The wind blowing through my hair
The scent of spring gliding by
Exhilaration, my heart going faster
Nothing can stop me now

Warm cool evening
With the top down
Driving a five speed soft top Jeep is a blast!


Comments about Exhilaration by Patricia Gale

  • (2/28/2009 11:45:00 PM)

    Very naughty Patricia but very nice. I have a similar one about a spinning top. Your words and images are so free flowing after the let down. A very clever piece of writing. Karin Anderson (Report)Reply

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  • (1/6/2008 2:53:00 AM)

    Another very good poem here Patricia up to your usual high standards (Report)Reply

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  • Paul Butters (5/12/2007 8:14:00 AM)

    As our late great comedian Eric Morecambe would say, 'There's No Answer to That! ' Naughty but neat. Paul. (Report)Reply

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  • Melvina Germain (4/25/2007 9:45:00 PM)

    You naughty lady, what do you think I was thinking, Excellent Patricia
    --Melvina--
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 25, 2007

Poem Edited: Sunday, February 6, 2011


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