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Νυχτερινή Χιονόπτωση [ F.Frosini: Nocturnal Snowing]

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''Ας πέσει τo χνουδάτο τούτο χιόνι
στα όνειρά μας επάνω, να τα κάνει να λάμψουν''.
Απελευθερώσου.
Η ανάσα σου λειαίνει αμετάθετους ουρανούς,
όμως η αντίληψη ακόμα να ξανοίξει σφραγισμένες αλήθειες.
Είναι τάχα περισπασμός προς χαμένες σκέψεις,
προς χαμένα πρόσωπα, ημαρτημένα ξεχασμένα πεπραγμένα!
Αν έψαχνες τον άλλο δρόμο, του φόβου πέραν
ή της αμηχανίας πέραν, ξυπνώντας το επόμενο πρωί,
θα μάθαινες ίσως τότε
πώς να κρατήσεις ζωντανό το νυσταλέο νου,
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Νυχτερινή Χιονόπτωση [ F.Frosini: Nocturnal Snowing]
This is a translation of the poem Nocturnal Snowing by Fabrizio Frosini
Thursday, January 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: ambiguity,love and pain,memories,pain,painful
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
To μετέφρασα στις 5-9 Ιαν.2016.Ελπίζω να ακούγεται και στον έλληνα αναγνώστη πάρα πολύ ωραίο.Πιο εύκολα θα το νοιώσει κανείς αν λάβει υπόψη του και τα σχόλια στην αγγλική και ιταλική εκδοχή του ποιητή, στο poemhunter.com/ Fabrizio Frosini, Nocturnal Snowing.....΄Ενας διάλογος με μνήμες του παρελθόντος, σκέψεις και όνειρα του παρόντος, υποσυνείδητα κι ασυνείδητα να εναλλάσσονται στα όνειρα και τη σκέψη του ποιητή, ένα αμφίσημο πολλών εκδοχών και ερμηνειών ποίημα που σαγηνεύει με την πολυδιάστατη, ανισόπεδη κατανομή των διαστάσεών του.
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COMMENTS
Sofia Kioroglou 14 January 2016
???? ?a?? ??µ?t??! ?p??ß? s??! ???ta t?t??a!
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Dimitrios Galanis 14 January 2016
A?t?, a?ap?t? S?f?a, ?ta? a??et? d?s????.??e??st??e ?a d?aß?s? ??a ta s????a t?? a??????? ?a? t?? ?ta?????? e?d???? ?a? ?a ??t?s? ?a? t? ß???e?a t?? ?d??? t?? Faµp??ts??.?? d?aß?se?? ?a? t? s????? µ?? st? s????? t?? ?e???d??? ?a ?ata??ße?? ?a???te?a ??at? ?ta? d?s????.?p? t? ??e??? st?? p?a?µat???t?ta, ap? t? s??e?d?t? st?? as??e?de? ep??????, p???ep?ped?.???a??st? p?? ??a t? ?a?? s?? ????.
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Leloudia Migdali 11 January 2016
Excellent translation! Interesting choice of wording! Wonderful poem! I liked it! As well, as the other versions!
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Dimitrios Galanis 12 January 2016
Dimitrios Galanis To µet?f?asa st?? 5-9 ?a?.2016.??p??? ?a a????eta? ?a? st?? ?????a a?a???st? p??a p??? ??a??.??? e????a ?a t? ????se? ?a?e?? a? ??ße? ?p??? t?? ?a? ta s????a st?? a?????? e?d??? t?? p???t?.[poemhunter.com/Fabrizio Frosini Nocturnal Snowing] ???a? d??????? µe µ??µe? t?? pa?e????t??, s???e?? ?a? ??e??a t?? pa???t??, ?p?s??e?d?ta ?? as??e?d?ta ?a e?a???ss??ta? sta ??e??a ?a? t? s???? t?? p???t?, ??a aµf?s?µ? p????? e?d???? ?a? e?µ??e??? p???µa p?? sa???e?e? µe t?? p???d??stat?, a??s?ped? ?ata??µ? t?? p??e?t?se?? t??.//S?? pa?a??t? ed? t? s????? µ?? se ???? d?µ?s?e?s? t?? ??a ?a ?ata??ße?? ?t? p???µat? e??a? ??a d?s???? p???µa.???a??st? ??a t?? ?a??s??? s?? ?a? t?? ?a?? s?? ????.
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Fabrizio Frosini 09 January 2016
and please, extend my thanks to your daughter, also, for her kindness in reading and praise my poem
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Fabrizio Frosini 09 January 2016
******************************************************************************* My words about being no reason to look for Vitti or others, refers to the fact that I trust you. I've translated - into my native language - poems written by other authors, and I know 'first hand' that choosing the right words to make the original meaning (or what I 'feel' that an 'original meaning' can be) in a different language, is - quite often - not so easy. For such a reason I try to put myself into thinking to be translating my own poetry.. this means paying much attention not to be sloppy, so to respect another author's work. And I think that this is what you have done, translating my poetry. Right? :) *******************************************************************************
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Dimitrios Galanis 20 January 2016
Whenever I do read it in my translation I do assure myself that it is a great poem of yours, dear Fabrizio.May be one of the greatest.I can not believe too that I have done so good a translation too.
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Fabrizio Frosini 08 January 2016
:) no, no reason to look for Mondiano or Vitti, dear Dimitrios
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Fabrizio Frosini 08 January 2016
as I told you previoulsy, it's a pity I can't understand Greek.. but it is nice seeing my poetry translated in a language that means so much to our common civilization..
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Dimitrios Galanis 08 January 2016
If you would be in the temptetion to see it in google's automatic translation, let me say that I had tried it quite a lot of times, but I concluded that it is only right in 20 cases out of a hundred.
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Dimitrios Galanis 08 January 2016
I do not know whether Mario Vitti is still living.He was professor in Tusca uni. of Viterbo.He is an expert on new greek poetry.Perhaps you could come in touch with him.Send him my translations of your poems and let him you know whether my translations are good ones.
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Fabrizio Frosini 08 January 2016
another poem of mine translated in your native language! wow.. Thank you, my friend. I'd say that it is a remarkably achivement, Dimitrios, because my poem is not an easy one.. :)
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Dimitrios Galanis 08 January 2016
In my greek, dear Fabrizio, it keeps all its meaning found by commentators in it.It seems to balance upon certain and uncertain ambiguities, ambivalances or doubtfulness.Conscious and subconscious hints are also left to be meant.I think You should come in contact with the professor of Palermo Mondiano who is an expert on new greek poetry and ask his opinion about my translations of your poems.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 January 2016
Let's drop to plush it snow in our dreams up, make them shine. '' Release. The breath your softens staunch heavens.. Very amazing expression of love and pain in this poem that speaks about secrets of expression. Fantastic sharing.10
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Dimitrios Galanis 08 January 2016
My own is a translation of F.Frosini's Nocturnal Snowing.A poem he has also in Italian composed.Which one have you, dear Kumarmani, read?
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