Manonton Dalan

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Fair >>> - Poem by Manonton Dalan

look right through
can you see; see you
beautiful things be
does it makes you smile
like a smirk beneath shed
those dark glasses on
wondering word of wisdom

can you hear yourself
whispering sweet buzz
lingering in your head
tip tap your finger
wishing a nice music to
cradle, cuddle, hug
heaven all your might
before darkness capture

Topic(s) of this poem: dreaming, happiness


Comments about Fair >>> by Manonton Dalan

  • Thomas Plotz (12/8/2015 1:25:00 PM)


    Sometimes, the tip tap of your fingers, is more than music. I catch myself tapping out Morse Code..- =U or.. =I; there are other patterns of music that could be transpose into Code. (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/8/2015 2:22:00 AM)


    You can see the beauty through right dreaming. Very fantastic sharing definitely. Wisely penned poem shared.10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 8, 2015



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