Nature feels sober
On this cloudy fall day
Sunny morns winding down
For chilled mornings
Colorful leaves roll over ground
Like sleeping ballerinas roll in bed
After a night's performance-
Limp and timid.
A very good write expressing the arrival of winter when everything is off color and taking shelter either by hiding themselves or else sacrificing even. Very good addressing.
Wow! I have no words. I love the calm feeling of description given. Amazing job! KW
A beautiful description of autumn giving way to winter! Colorful leaves roll over ground Like sleeping ballerinas roll in bed................. A lovely comparison! You have deftly drawn an enjoyable scene, Savita!
Sleeping ballerinas, what an image your poetry conveys of colorful wind swept days! Delightful.
Landscaped portrait of nature on a chilled morning of a fall day is superbly painted. Enjoyed the poem.Thanks for sharing. Ten points.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
In this amazing imagery sober feeling of nature is expressed in fantastic way. Sunny and chilled morning rolls colorful leaves on ground to hold many memories in heart. Very interesting poem on nature is composed. Nicely penned...10