Fall Poem by Savita Tyagi


Rating: 5.0

Nature feels sober
On this cloudy fall day
Sunny morns winding down
For chilled mornings
Colorful leaves roll over ground
Like sleeping ballerinas roll in bed
After a night's performance-
Limp and timid.

Monday, November 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
Kumarmani Mahakul 09 November 2015

In this amazing imagery sober feeling of nature is expressed in fantastic way. Sunny and chilled morning rolls colorful leaves on ground to hold many memories in heart. Very interesting poem on nature is composed. Nicely penned...10

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Amitava Sur 01 December 2015

A very good write expressing the arrival of winter when everything is off color and taking shelter either by hiding themselves or else sacrificing even. Very good addressing.

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Kewayne Wadley 30 November 2015

Wow! I have no words. I love the calm feeling of description given. Amazing job! KW

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Valsa George 15 November 2015

A beautiful description of autumn giving way to winter! Colorful leaves roll over ground Like sleeping ballerinas roll in bed................. A lovely comparison! You have deftly drawn an enjoyable scene, Savita!

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Edmund Strolis 09 November 2015

Sleeping ballerinas, what an image your poetry conveys of colorful wind swept days! Delightful.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 09 November 2015

Landscaped portrait of nature on a chilled morning of a fall day is superbly painted. Enjoyed the poem.Thanks for sharing. Ten points.

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