False Ending? Poem by Alex Gomez

False Ending?

Rating: 2.8


If we lead a virtuous life,
the angels will come down
and they take us to a heavenly place.
If we live with mal intentions,
a gruesome evil will reach for us
and drag our souls into the abyss.

But can we really believe all of this?
Is there really an existence after death?
Is Heaven merely a fabrication?
Is religion simply around to control the masses?

It’s all uncertain
Nothing is fully believable.
Nothing is fully probable.
Nothing is seemingly possible.
It all seems like a false ending…

The only thing that truly matters:
I am alive now.
I am still living.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stephen Black 23 March 2009

All's I can say is 'WOW'. This is definitely your best poem yet!

0 0 Reply
Karly Krasne 02 December 2009

Wow. You are talented. I love it. Thanks for your comment :) I enjoy reading your writing as well.

0 0 Reply

thats a really good poem...

0 0 Reply

wow..what a very positive outlook in life.. as there is hope., , there's life..

0 0 Reply
Linda Weischedel 05 April 2009

Great poem Alex, highly enjoyed reading it.

0 0 Reply
~ Jon London ~ 28 March 2009

A great piece of flowing poetry, well expressed my friend

0 0 Reply
BEST POEMS
BEST POETS
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success