far and so alone…
you stood by the fire…
waiting for the one..
far and so sadly
you ran out madly
after the love you’ve lost
far and out of control…
you went there unwanted…
went to look for the one…
whose heart’s like a stone
far and so sadly
you came back dreamingly
waiting for death to come
far and so sadly
your heart ran out madly
from the ribs of your chest
as it was in the prison…
the prison that held prisoner
who just ran out wild…
for the lover who left
careless. for another
someone who is only
doing things for the other
who thinks that love him better…….
well done anna, this is a fine poem. i like the refrain part of it. keep writing anna.
u are truelly a great poet and i wish i reac ur talent someday
touchy! 10+++++++ sometime the real realization comes when time.......
Metaphorically and musically rich. The melancholic tone is dominant but musically inviting. Great!
Love is a funny game, Anna...you would get beaten there square often you unaware... pretty good write on sad lines...brings in the entire pain that lost love creates inside mind...thanks...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hi anna very nice touchy lines liked it its a beauty....be proud of it cheers