when i was listening to my heart's beating
i woke up by a knock on the door
my heart stopped; i felt afraid
i wondered, i asked: who's that?
but i had to open the door
now or before...
when i opened the door
i saw someone whom i knew before
he was crying, and a little alarming
he said that your lover has died
i couldn't belive, when he said that thing
is it real or i'm dreamimg?
then i found out that it was real
i wasn't dreaming and i had to believe
at that time the sorrow comes
without permission or knocking door
only two ways that i had to go
killing myself or living alone..
are u realy 15 or am i dreaming too..lol....thanks good poem...10
a great composition...thanx 'Anna Jonson ' for sharing your amazing work with us..some time we cant control our life..poet reflect this thing with few emotional lines...10 for it
you like me, I remember oen moment but I don't know is really or dreams, keep up dude! , this nice
mm, it was great if you were just dreaming but since it was real it is really sad...but rember always smile.... i give 10 your sister: Hataw
Yes profound feeling...a few words seem out of place but the idea is right there
Anna, this is so sad for you sometimes things don't happen the way we plan. Please dont kill yourself. I like the poem
this speaks in volumes and has a profound impact to it..wonderful work u amazing!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It is a beautiful poem, very nice. I love it.