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Farewell

Rating: 5.0
Cold soul sizzles around the body
Half cooked at first attempt
The push is harder
On the final breath
Solemn luminous light visits
And diminishes
Dusk leaps into total darkness
In a blink of eyes
The host is separated
Songs of sorrow
Fill the room
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 January 2010
The host is separated Songs of sorrow Fill the room If you miss me Flip the pages My poems are in store.ya it is painful always..reminds of our long association with colleagues...10 read mine...bidding farewell....anywhere... i miss
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Rup Pokharel 19 September 2009
extra ordinary setting. thank your wit. 10++
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Carol Rhodes 19 September 2009
So, Mister, unless another site is paying you to post your brilliant insightful trips into the human spirit and world, how could you forsake and break the loving hearts and hungry minds of all your devoted and faithful fans? Has to be that the new site will guarantee that only readers with intelligent quotients of at least 200 will be eligible, yes? Your popularity here isn't sufficient to maintain your creative impulses and genius? Just joking. We all know life isn't fair, but there are enough of us who'll be moaning and groaning, sending subliminal messages your way to keep you awake at night...if you find your Muse has abandoned you, you'll know it's us interrupting the flow, yes? With love and best wishes, I want only the best for you. Carol
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Rachel Butler 19 September 2009
The push is harder On the final breath Rachel Ann Butler
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Lakshmi Venkataraman 18 September 2009
nice oone! .... you make a great poet~~
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Shingih Big-thigh 17 September 2009
i like the poem, you are a great poet
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Sunshine Daydream 15 September 2009
Beautiful not to long or to short i love it im gonna vote it.....9 cos i dont know someparts
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Anand Madhukar 15 September 2009
Lovely with a wonderful conclusion.
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Rebecca Harvey 13 September 2009
this poem is amazing you are trueley a great poet
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Mieke Jurgen 12 September 2009
great poem, my friend...you are a great poet...........10
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