Farewell And Goodnight Poem by Evelyn Judy Buehler

Farewell And Goodnight

Rating: 5.0


In the midst of red evening, leaves fall from the sky,
Yielding lavish hues and vibrancy, to gathering dusk.
Under a pearl moon, twirling leaves wave goodbye,
To warmer, brighter, gold days, in the pale stardust.

Yielding lavish hues and vibrancy, to gathering dusk,
Pretty, migratory birds, are taking the longest flight,
To warmer, brighter, gold days, in the pale stardust,
And final blooms of the season, add a cool goodnight.

Pretty, migratory birds, are taking the longest flight,
But all the departed will return again one blithe day.
And final blooms of the season, add a cool goodnight.
Exuded fragrances thrill the scene of lovely disarray.

But all the departed will return again one blithe day,
Under a pearl moon, twirling leaves wave goodbye,
Exuded fragrances thrill the scene of lovely disarray,
In the midst of red evening, leaves fall from the sky.

Farewell And Goodnight
Wednesday, September 21, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,evening,goodbye,birds,leaves,sunset
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is in the pantoum form. Photograph courtesy of JoshuaWoroniecki at Pixabay
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon 23 September 2022

" Yielding lavish hues and vibrancy, to gathering dusk, Pretty, migratory birds, are taking the longest flight, "… so very colourful and vibrant. Beautiful and invigorating. Loved it.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 24 September 2022

Your warm appreciation is delightful. Thank you.

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Kevin Patrick 22 September 2022

A fantastic description of my favorite season! . So beautiful and vivid this poem is an inspiration! . Thank you for sharing!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 24 September 2022

You are more than welcome. Thank you for your kind words.

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Richard Wlodarski 22 September 2022

An incredibly beautiful tribute to autumn's colourful leaves. And a fond farewell to our fine feathered friends. Stunning imagery, Evelyn!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 24 September 2022

Thank you so much for your lovely, gracious remarks.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 22 September 2022

a true autumn poem Bravo!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 24 September 2022

Thank you for your warm response.

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