Father Dear Father Poem by Tribhawan Kaul

Father Dear Father

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Father dear father. (Father's day special)
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Standing tall at the horizon with an aura around
Wrapped in the mind emotions abound
Eyes talk but not the lips
Pain and laughter take the dip
Watching the waves touch and go
Children get blessed when he bestows
Tending the future with utmost care
Not the one who would share
The pain.
Absence of rustling of leaves
Sportingly watching a broken tree
Branches scattered or blown away
Seeds carried far away
Love and affection now much in demand
Never felt let down, still in command
Satisfied he feels and laughs at the time
Conquering smile is noble and is sublime
Payback! Can't think but just a prayer
Should father me in next life, if GOD cares.
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Saturday, June 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: social
This poem is written to celebrate Father's day which falls on 15th June,2014
Pheko Motaung 14 June 2014

As a father I am very happy for you dedicated this wonderful poem to us fathers.Thank you very much

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 17 June 2014

An impressive poem on father's day in fab metaphors too. Thumbs up sir.

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Shahzia Batool 17 June 2014

A special poem on a special relation of life, written in a universal ink, along with all those common, similar characteristics identified in all fathers...yes, we can't pay him back all the favors he bestows on us...fathers day and mothers day write ups are so special that i wish everybody should read, especially those who have the blessing and pleasure of their company in their lives, just to learn not to misbehave with them or not to speak aloud in front of them...a very strong fathers' day poem this one is!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 30 July 2014

an outstanding tribute to the dearest friend in life. the last two lines remain etched in mind.

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Neela Nath Das 11 July 2014

A nice tribute to Father.'Father'- -this word is to me affection and care incarnate.

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Father there is no comparison to this word and its position. Father dear father a nice poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 June 2014

A wonderful tribute to father...With many captivating lines... Payback! Can't think but just a prayer Should father me in next life, if GOD cares.... Thanks for sharing with us this lovely poem...

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Valsa George 17 June 2014

Can't think but just a prayer Should father me in next life, if GOD cares The greatest acknowledgement, a son can ever give to his father! A great tribute to your father and all fathers around the globe!

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Tribhawan Kaul

Tribhawan Kaul

Srinagar (J & K) India
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