Can you imagine the beauty of sea at sunrise and sunset?
When the golden sun shines and smiles to you.
When the sky looks orange and releases you
In this time, you feel relaxed...and you feel you are in utopia.
According to me, what makes me happy
filled up with glee
to look and talk to this endless and eternal sea
In the other side, we have to thank its creator'ALLAH'
Yes Merna, sea is endless and eternal... '' Had ocean been my confidant I would have given it all my depths'.......Naseer
It seems eternal and attracting.... yes and thanx to Allah is very true praising for the features of His creations 10
Eternal beauty and power of the sea perfectly expressed in your poem.Thank you. Best wishes. A.
Can you imagine the beauty of sea at sunrise and sunset? When the golden sun shines and smiles to you. When the sky looks orange and releases you In this time, you feel relaxed...and you feel you are in utopia. what a great piece is this of your sweet work..love it and really you are treu to say... appreciate your work and talent and hope our ties of words sharing will never stop
According to me, what makes me happy filled up with glee to look and talk to this endless and eternal sea.................we should always thank allah for his creation and chanceforus to see everything.. sonice it is...10 read mine o, lord, , prayer....humble submission
I am an atheist. So to lay all my cards out on the table I did not neccessarily agree with the last line. However the rest of it, the beauty of sunset and sunrise at sea. That was universal. And that, not any religious connotations or denotations for that matter, is what you should be judged on. And quite highly I might add.8/10
beholding Nature and saying Thanks ALLAH/ the landscape still stick in my Mind, a Perfect imagery... that's the BEAUTY OF THE LORD. an Oceanic 10 Thanks For Sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very beautiful Merna.Keep writing.