With only a few leftovers of coldness
The day dawns upon new tender buds
Soft rays turning sharp right above the head
As the day proceeds you want to lighten up
Removing the layers like you tear off memories
One by one you discard the superfluous
And end up with bare necessities of heart
Love becomes all you need to carry
A hand becomes all you need to hold.
" Love becomes all you need to carry // A hand becomes all you need to hold."… most ardent passions of the heart get revealed in these few marvellous words.
3. Little does the winter help to ease the baggage of harsh cold realities, but the amorous touch of an early Spring provide wings to the heart to soar high.. top score and onto Myfavourites
Thank you everyone from the core of my heart for reading and appreciating. I just discovered that this poem is selected as POTD. I am honoured and humbled by the heart-warming comments.
I suppose you disabled the rating anyways this is beyond ratings...To my Fav list.
Awesome poem. The change is eminent and you captured the very essence of it. How nature transforms and with that our mood and behaviour. By the way Congrats for POTD for this wonderful poem.
Dear Nosheen, congratulations! great t seen thisn exquisit poem honred
Very poetic outing from your poetic heart, dear Nosheen. This Galaxy is for you!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I love this beautiful poem, words from the depths of the heart. Winter starting to fade away, ushering in the Queen of All Seasons, the Spring. As we remove the many layers of sweaters ans dresses, so does our heart shed the layers baggage that we carried through winter.
Thank you so much Sir for your valuable words. So heart warming!