Floating Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Floating

Rating: 5.0


Floating by
Serenely, steadily
Never standing still
As people come and go
Never pausing
As we cry or laugh
Time flowing
In the sea and the clouds
Its wings never tired

Floating
Monday, August 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edmund Strolis 29 August 2018

To capture a feeling is elusive, once you concentrate upon it the shape changes and slips away. Your words shine a light upon that liquid reality....well done Nosheen!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 August 2018

Time flowing In the sea and the clouds Its wings never tired.......so touching and true. Time flows without rest. A beautiful poem nicely executed.10

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Unnikrishnan E S 27 August 2018

Wow! Poignant chain of images, very emotive.. Time and clouds have wings, wings that are never tired. But how their flight affects us! ! ! 100+++

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Kelly Kurt 27 August 2018

Time is omnipresent.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 August 2018

The last three lines stand as the epitome of this beautiful little poem...10

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Nosheen Irfan

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Lahore, Pakistan
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