Floating Poem by Nosheen Irfan

The last three lines stand as the epitome of this beautiful little poem...10

People come and go but time contanstly and contineously flows on on and on........Appreciated the undelying philosophy of this sagacious poem. Full marks........

To capture a feeling is elusive, once you concentrate upon it the shape changes and slips away. Your words shine a light upon that liquid reality....well done Nosheen!

Time flowing In the sea and the clouds Its wings never tired.......so touching and true. Time flows without rest. A beautiful poem nicely executed.10

Wow! Poignant chain of images, very emotive.. Time and clouds have wings, wings that are never tired. But how their flight affects us! ! ! 100+++

Time is omnipresent.