Feeling Lost Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Feeling Lost

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Today I will finish my job to
Come out to see a new sun shine
I have a mind free from care
I want to leave all that is mine

Today I will no more go back
To my work and strive for fame
I won't make struggle to survive
I wish I should have a new name

Today I will go up the hill and
Call His name looking at the sky
To make my mind soar like a free
Birds before from here I jump and die

Sunday, July 31, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: pain,lost
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 02 August 2016

Name and fame, money and materials never decide our happiness, a soul to soul live emotions, could bring back the spark, don't loose hope, please move on dear, we are here to listen keep sharing, thanks

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Annette Aitken 31 July 2016

What a good write, you can feel the pain as you read through this. you capture lost so very well. nicely done. Annette

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Randhir Kaur 31 July 2016

I won't make struggle to survive...so free from worries. I loved the images..I can imagine everything in front of me. This is a painful life.... Well written Sir.

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