Feels Like Home Ft Unwritten Soul Poem by Rekha Mandagere

Feels Like Home Ft Unwritten Soul

Rating: 4.8


Listening to the different voices within
The ever-last record that I never forgotten
she said once but holding it for all time
That's is power of my mama words
She said

What a lovely star in the sky!
Made me feel emotionally high
The gentle touch of which I can never deny
Sole earthly objects fail to weigh
Could someone there to tell me why?
Of course, it’s not a thing to buy,
The entire wealth around stands in shy
Before the gift of God sent to me
At once I feel enthralled to see
The lovely child in velvet smiling aloud hahaha

Lovely child, I tell you soon
Looking at the rainbow moon
Said with warmth to sooth the child
you brought home the memories of golden tale
Never get nervous to reach your goal
Wait for YOUR DAY with constant hope
Faith should always make you deep'
My Soul whispers, HONOURED, Just a step down to YOU!

Her words calm me again
So I feel safe like I'm home
To fly with the clouds again
sometimes thunder can harm fragile heart
Never couldn't be this easy find the future road
But I know, the sunrise will come truly fair
As gently the wind touching my hair
Remind me of my mom's touch
Again my spirit regained

When I cry she whispers to me
Dear to this ear,
I swear with full of my heart
One day you will be proud
Like tonight moonlight behind that cloud

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Antonio Liao 06 July 2011

just a little time, those moment becomes the glamorous day of reading...nice reality in imagery of literature...God bless...a 10

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 06 July 2011

It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Warmest regards Akmal

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Aranthabailu Ummar 16 September 2011

these all are the natura things. Mothers smile and childs cry it comes to united that day she will be called mother. We will compare it for more natural beauties but this is real when she declares to her motherhood.

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Elena Sandu 19 July 2011

Beautiful poem! In the end there is nothing like a mother's hug when in despair.. Any mother is proud of her child but there is nothing on earth more rewarding than her baby's smile. May you keep close to your child and daily have a sip from those lovely smiles! Thank you for share,10

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Vinod Kumar 09 July 2011

Great expression beyond the spell....Reality of understanding Nice Job 10+

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Dr.subhendu Kar 07 July 2011

what a lovely star in the sky! Made me feel emotionally high The gentle touch of which I can never deny Sole earthly objects fail to weigh............................. as it engrosses upon blue over skin of sky as light of love etches gloss of luminosity heart smooches in red by gleams of reflex soul serenades eternity by unearthly touch, ..inspiring write by the imagery bedecked by love of grace that redounds to joy within, yet of unique genre,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Santosh Sharma 06 July 2011

A nice one with soothing touch of love good description - rate 9

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