Few Lines In Fierce Pain! Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Few Lines In Fierce Pain!

Rating: 5.0


He is too old to cry
Laying his head on his mom's lap.
Men do not cry on any other lap;
He looks for a cave nearby
Where he can hide himself
Whenever he feels heavy
And drop a tear or two, to relieve his pain.

Dhaka
22 March 2019

Friday, March 22, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When the pain is intense, shedding tears in solitude sometimes helps!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 22 March 2019

Tears The garbage stone in heart! tears wild mountain in mind! Tears does not let the heart-mind fly o shed it; devastate it let the heart-mind be slacken to fly unchained

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Khairul Ahsan 22 March 2019

Thanks for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts here, @Mahtab Bangalee.

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Lora Colon 22 March 2019

Crying is so necessary for our well being when we get overwhelmed by emotions. This poem explains so nicely why a man would prefer to cry in solitude. A pleasure to read.

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Khairul Ahsan 22 March 2019

Thanks a lot, Lora, for stopping by and sharing your wisdom having read my insignificant poem. I am much inspired by your kind comment and the generous rating of the poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 March 2019

This is marvelous poem, sir Khairul....10+++++++++++++

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Khairul Ahsan 09 September 2020

@Edward Kofi Louis, Too old to cry! - Yes, that's it and so the pain is more! Thanks for the comment and the quote.

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Khairul Ahsan 09 September 2020

@Aqua Flower, 'sometimes we feel better after a good cry' - yes, of course. We feel a lot better and see things clearer. 'Both female and male share same emotion yet society feels men should not show this; ' - appreciate your understanding, dear poetess! Thank you.

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Khairul Ahsan 09 September 2020

@Kumarmani Mahakul, Thank you so much for your inspiring comment and the generous appraisal of the poem. The comment left me much inspired.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 May 2019

Too old to cry! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aqua Flower 21 April 2019

Crying is a necessary release of emotions....sometimes we feel better after a good cry. Both female and male share same emotion yet society feels men should not show this....a good poem expressing this dilemma.

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