E Nigma


~fibonnaci Holds Energy~ - Poem by E Nigma

Listen
Open
Your eyes
Draw the curtain
While your lips whisper softly
Into a hollow projection of myself clinging here
To a lifeless shell echoing a love song of what may never be

Dreams so cultivate the lifelines of creation so it seems you and I
Are satellites drifting in space waiting for reception
You are the unstable metaphor
I've always wanted
But we
Can't
Be

My
Minds
Eye sees
Energy in imagination
Reaching towards all your elusiveness
Stretching outward beyond my means to touch your
Harmony while melodies sing from within all that is forgotten, my sweet memory

How you never leave me, but hide, within the shadows of my heart
Beating on the walls from within my depths
You break me so easily
So I can't
I can't
Hold
You

Topic(s) of this poem: Love


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem was written using the Fibonnaci Sequence as the poetic pattern and though it enters into the system from the first word to the thirteenth perfectly fitting, once posted it messes with its structured form which is an annoyance. But it is what it is.

Comments about ~fibonnaci Holds Energy~ by E Nigma

  • Galina Italyanskaya (2/6/2015 5:34:00 AM)

    (0) 1 1 2 3 5 8 13...
    Wow!)
    Very clever!
    And pasionate.
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  • Shania K. Younce (12/14/2014 4:45:00 PM)

    Beautifully written. I enjoyed reading it. The three poems you invited me to read are wonderful. This poem is very good to. For some reason and I have no Idea why; I feel as if this were all coming from a distant time. Well, before I was even alive. Bien! (Report)Reply

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  • (11/10/2014 11:54:00 PM)

    I like the typical structured form being breached. I hate those who are determined to stick to a text book style. Loved the flow and emotion here. The horrible existence of being so close yet so far and unreachable. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/10/2014 11:39:00 PM)

    This is by far an extraordinary poem. One is softly projected into the poetic land of dreams and feelings of the poet.in a most captivating way. The metaphors and images caress the mind and heart. A kind of miraculous hypnosis surrounds and makes us weightless, as we travel thru this oneiric world.
    I believe this elusive love of the poet is poetry itself, in any case beautifully done and unforgettable. To be read
    many, many times. Truly wonderful, different from anything else and terribly romantic with a sent of the roses of time, infinite and eternal.
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  • Hazel Durham (11/9/2014 7:20:00 AM)

    Your elusive lover always just out of your reach as you dream of a connection of mind and spirit to capture your butterfly of fleeting affection.
    Outstanding write!
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  • Kevin Patrick (11/7/2014 7:24:00 PM)

    NICE! I tried doing a Fibonacci sequence like this, within the guidelines of the syllable structure, but it doesn't have the density of content hear. The mirror effect works well especially for the middle, I can see where you were going with it, the problem is the website doesn't have good parameters for keeping the work as you transcribe it in the text box.

    Stretching outward beyond my means to touch your harmony
    Not a pickup line you would use to meet a girl, but it works well. Excellent content, and Great execution. If Escher was a poet he would approve
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  • Geoffrey Fafard (11/7/2014 5:42:00 PM)

    Wonderful! Breaking away from structured form in this FS pattern has helped to or made you create a poetic story of emotional impact that delivers enjoyment and interest to me. Absolutely love it. Geoffrey. (Report)Reply

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  • Mihaela Pirjol (11/7/2014 9:02:00 AM)

    I love this poem for all its qualities: structure, visual and emotional impact! Absolutely Wonderful! (Report)Reply

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  • Diane Hine (11/6/2014 6:10:00 PM)

    I like this. I wrote a Fibonacci poem too, but counting syllables rather than words - this makes it easier to squeeze in. I agree with you, the narrow format has messed up some of my poems too. It makes it very difficult to write a cleave poem for instance. Your poem is mirrored - good idea. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 6, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, November 7, 2014


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