Enyinwa Okechukwu Enyinwa
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Fidelity Of Love

Rating: 5.0
Back in my hands even rain
could not stop us. Our heart
beat in reunion, think about
us then the fidelity of love
The angels wings are us, with
our throne in the moon the stars
can bear withness to these, when
we smile Romeo and Juilet smiles
love can testify to these.
Love dwell in us so live for love.
Allotey Abossey 21 June 2015
Love is a beautiful thing and so is your poem
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Jahan Zeb 31 October 2011
the last line is outstanding 'love dwell in us so live for love'. the idea really thrilled me and reminded me of my love I have lost. i still love her and perhaps i live for her. enjoyed it.
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Chitra - 10 October 2011
emotions personified...the tone and thought behind your poem are marvelous!
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Rekha Mandagere 12 September 2011
It is highly educative and inspiring. i really enjoyed the tone of the poem. Good work. Great message!
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Stefanie Fontker 07 September 2011
A truly beautiful poem, one of the best I've read in a while. I like your style and I hope you continue to write beautiful poems like this one.
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Unwritten Soul 07 September 2011
The collision of souls could entwined a feeling if it a space to attached together...sounds like two beats be one rhythm..keep it more writing to come_Unwritten Soul
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Allemagne Roßmann 06 September 2011
Great poem and passionate write i must say.Amazing choice of words here.
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Steven Rowe 06 September 2011
The simplicity of this poem makes it the beauty that it is. The imagery is vivid and I can see two people sitting on the moon in a throne as the personified stars marvel at their beauty that transcends over the world and bring happiness and love to mankind as seen in your description of Romeo and Juliet. All in all, a great piece!
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Masaomi Tezuka 06 September 2011
Nice poem it truely speaks bout love and just good imagery. I rate it a 10 good job
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