Can you stare at the sun
when it is at it's peak?
can you swin the atlantic
ocean from it Africa shore
to it Europe shore?
can you stretch out and touch
the sky?
excuse me can you win over
all heart of men? or can your
beauty match that of your
creator? tell me can you outplay
your fate? i bet you can't.
Then what make you think you
can stop love? love moves like
a huricane when it find your heart
it rip apart pain and hatred and replace
it with peace and joy. Love is just
unstoppable
Impressive and touching! This is a very well crafted and thought provoking write that clearly shows you talent one more time! Questions raised that can touch souls all over the Poetry World! Brilliant! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City
Love is a mixed emotion. For two sided love affair, its just sweet. And for one sided, its painfull but sweet as well, thats the reason people hold on to love even when unreciprocated. I like your poem. Upcoming talent.: -)
nice, short and so meaningful in our ancient religion we have this written: be the sun so that if u dont wanna shine u cant cheers
An insightful depiction of powerful spiritual force that is love, well articulated and elegantly penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing.
A wonderful poem and so true! I look forward to reading more of your work!
Very nice. Your earnestness for your love thru the bouquet of questions gas been intensified. Loved this job.
I think you know the answer.To denote the tone of romance, your keenness to it, you questioned.It added flavor and emphasized it either.Great!
There are lot of questions but you skip from one to ask other with nice tones which left heart move softly to carve smile on faces of all readers, good job_Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
When we find our lovers love is sweet and enjoyable but we lose them love is bitter and painful. Anyway I like it