Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 173,056 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Final Movement - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

While time rings the bell
Life lights up and moves
We see child takes birth
He grows up to old age
In this context shared
Page is ready to notice
We note down moments
While child grows here
Life span comes on reduction
The thread shortens
As time pulls the path
We get ready for final movement
And that is why we should feel
To hold wisdom of God
For travelling well to next
As destination pulls luck
In mind and spirit we see
The next path to light on
In purity of mind we feel
Final movement matters a lot
To nourish life after this
Journey is fixed perhaps.

Topic(s) of this poem: life and death


Comments about Final Movement by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Kelly Kurt (10/29/2015 4:43:00 PM)


    Every movement counts. Nicely written (Report) Reply

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  • Anil Kumar Panda (10/29/2015 10:47:00 AM)


    Yeah, every ones journey is fixed with time and destination. Nice drop.10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (10/29/2015 10:19:00 AM)


    'Life lifts up'! ! ! But, let us always seek for the truth and live. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (10/29/2015 10:09:00 AM)


    Final movement matters a lot - a truth of life is wisely shared.10 (Report) Reply

  • (10/29/2015 9:57:00 AM)


    lovely poem on life's journey-10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 29, 2015



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