Final Movement Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Final Movement

Rating: 5.0


While time rings the bell
Life lights up and moves
We see child takes birth
He grows up to old age
In this context shared
Page is ready to notice
We note down moments
While child grows here
Life span comes on reduction
The thread shortens
As time pulls the path
We get ready for final movement
And that is why we should feel
To hold wisdom of God
For travelling well to next
As destination pulls luck
In mind and spirit we see
The next path to light on
In purity of mind we feel
Final movement matters a lot
To nourish life after this
Journey is fixed perhaps.

Thursday, October 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 29 October 2015

lovely poem on life's journey-10

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Milan Panda 13 October 2020

With the belling of time everything changes. All should walk with time. A nice poem!

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Kelly Kurt 29 October 2015

Every movement counts. Nicely written

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 October 2015

Yeah, every ones journey is fixed with time and destination. Nice drop.10++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 October 2015

'Life lifts up'! ! ! But, let us always seek for the truth and live. Nice work.

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Sanjukta Nag 29 October 2015

Final movement matters a lot - a truth of life is wisely shared.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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