No, this is not,
This way is not right for me,
So, I reject it immediately,
Then I see another way,
But this too does not satisfy me,
So, I leave it,
After a while,
I see a completely different path,
This time being enthusiastic,
I run towards it,
But alas!
I notice a serious flaw in its core,
I turn down it;
Thereafter I begin to think and think,
After a prolonged thought,
I find a great way in my own realm,
It's absolutely true and sublime,
Soon I accept it wholeheartedly.
simple and deep, definitely the right path would lead to the right destination, the right choosing is much important point, many thanks for this nice poem 10++
After a prolonged thought, I find a great way in my own realm, It's absolutely true and sublime, Soon I accept it wholeheartedly.
Core, store, shore! Following along, Different path. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
The path we chose in our life's journey might be hard and dangerous yet if we overcome those obstacles, we will become stronger to face whatever circumstances we may encounter in life. A well conveyed and crafted write.
Acceptance and rejections are some judgements which everyone has to make at some point in time. Nice poem.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
having found a great way in your own realm, is most of the times the correct one. It's absolutely true and sublime, exactly. A great poem appears now. Best wishes from The Netherlands, Sylvia Frances Chan