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First Love

Rating: 4.7

I saw a smiling sunflower
swaying in pink air
I smiled back at the happy face
will she reciprocate the stare?

My mirror-calm lake of the morning
learned to dance later on,
who made the ripples and big waves?
South wind silently glided thereon!

On the canvas of a serene nature
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Wednesday, June 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
Tom Billsborough 09 June 2016

Sumit, I think this is one of your best poems to date. Quite magical to both ear and eye. Well done. Tom Billsborough

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Sumit Ganguly 10 June 2016

Thank you, Tom.

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Sriranji Aratisankar 08 June 2016

O my life, store moving scenes, keep them safe in a vault when yellow autumn reigns in full taste all with sugar or salt. well written sumit. big 10 for you. Thanks.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 November 2017

A lovely poem.. lovely expression.. I loved this amazing piece..10

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Rajnish Manga 17 August 2017

You work magic when creating a collage of different shades of nature. Thanks, Sumit. I quote: On the canvas of a serene nature / she puts brush stroke of pink colour. South wind is a seasonal fairy O my life, store moving scenes / keep them safe in a vault

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Jasbir Chatterjee 12 April 2017

Nice poem with an eye-catching beginning and end; middle part needs some more chiselling; congrats on being poet of the day!

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Sumit Ganguly 13 April 2017

So kind of you for the constructive comment. Thanks a lot.

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Norah Tunney 12 April 2017

Charming, delightful poem, wonderful images that lift the spirit. Thank you Sumit

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A smiling sunflower and an yellow autumn both imply the richness and beauty of nature. Attuning with nature is the emotion of love. A very sweet poem! Congratulations!

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Sumit Ganguly 13 April 2017

Thank you for the inspiring note.

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