AMOUR
it’s not a cryptic language
that creates a barrier
nor a missive in communication
perhaps the wave-length of the mind
fails to comprehend the connotation
of the written words
may be the age that fails
to decipher the feelings of the heart
the shyness that fails to
bring the words into your lips
though the heart guards
a different secret altogether
your eyes depict a rosy picture
of the future though the present
seems to be disillusioned
in the process the invaluable
youth is lost forever…
Rajkumar@Kolkata
05-05-2009
perhaps the wave-length of the mind fails to comprehend the connotation of the written words......... ------ Precisely in terms of love.......women prefer to be more elaborate and frank getting to overtone the words inorder not to mislead on 'assumptions'............Thanks!
your eyes depict a rosy picture of the future though the present seems to be disillusioned in the process the invaluable youth is lost forever…....................Good Write........
yes; youth gets lost in the grinds of life...but mind kept as fresh as ever would compensate for the loss...good write, Rajkumar...you tell a sad truth there...and you tell it soft...10
Amour, love, amor, lanmou....this is simply beautiful. Love is 'not a cryptic language', it is a language that is so simple, that it became cryptically complex.
age to decipher the feelings of the heart-- I think age is not a barrier for love lovely poem in cryptic language yes cryptic beautiful! ! ! -10 anjali
Rajkumarda, I found the poem....cryptic! ! ! You want to say a lot, but in a mysterious way. It does invite curiousty...a certain mystique. Keep on.... Cheers. Subroto
i like this poem very much.in the process of not living with zeal and fervour for number of reasons the youth is lost forever.such lovely expression!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the youth is the uouth of the heart and the spirit and this poem filled by fresh youth....touchingly said