Rajkumar Mukherjee

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Amour - Poem by Rajkumar Mukherjee

AMOUR



it’s not a cryptic language

that creates a barrier

nor a missive in communication

perhaps the wave-length of the mind

fails to comprehend the connotation

of the written words



may be the age that fails

to decipher the feelings of the heart

the shyness that fails to

bring the words into your lips

though the heart guards

a different secret altogether



your eyes depict a rosy picture

of the future though the present

seems to be disillusioned

in the process the invaluable

youth is lost forever…


Rajkumar@Kolkata
05-05-2009


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  • Kesav Easwaran (5/17/2009 4:10:00 AM)

    yes; youth gets lost in the grinds of life...but mind kept as fresh as ever would compensate for the loss...good write, Rajkumar...you tell a sad truth there...and you tell it soft...10 (Report)Reply

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  • Hebert Logerie Sr. (5/12/2009 12:26:00 PM)

    Amour, love, amor, lanmou....this is simply beautiful. Love is 'not a cryptic language', it is a language that is so simple, that it became cryptically complex. (Report)Reply

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  • (5/11/2009 1:32:00 AM)

    age to decipher the feelings of the heart--
    I think age is not a barrier for love
    lovely poem in cryptic language
    yes cryptic
    beautiful! ! !
    -10 anjali
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  • (5/11/2009 1:10:00 AM)

    Rajkumarda,
    I found the poem....cryptic! ! ! You want to say a lot, but in a mysterious way. It does invite curiousty...a certain mystique. Keep on....
    Cheers.
    Subroto
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  • (5/7/2009 7:26:00 AM)

    i like this poem very much.in the process of not living with zeal and fervour for number of reasons the youth is lost forever.such lovely expression! (Report)Reply

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  • (5/6/2009 11:38:00 AM)

    your eyes depict a rosy picture

    of the future though the present

    seems to be disillusioned

    in the process the invaluable

    youth is lost forever…....................Good Write........
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  • (5/5/2009 11:45:00 PM)

    perhaps the wave-length of the mind
    fails to comprehend the connotation
    of the written words.........
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    Precisely in terms of love.......women prefer to be more elaborate and frank getting to overtone the words inorder not to mislead on 'assumptions'............Thanks!
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  • (5/5/2009 12:43:00 PM)

    the youth is the uouth of the heart and the spirit and this poem filled by fresh youth....touchingly said (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 5, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 5, 2009


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