Flash Thoughts Ill Poem by Savita Tyagi

Flash Thoughts Ill

Rating: 5.0


I am done
Want to quit
Why the idea of quitting is shunned
Favored against a fight to stay afloat
To beat the moment
Knowing fully the ship must sink
At a given moment
Unknown unpredictable
One who wants to quit
Knows fully too
That choosing is not in one's hands
still...........
Race is on
Time floats
I am a moment
With in a moment
My mass destined to shrink
A slow sucking
In a dark hole
Bubbles in a glass of soda
Sliding upwards
To burst upon surface
Not knowing their play
A tryst with destiny.

Tuesday, November 19, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dimitrios Galanis 13 February 2016

Another true, real poem poem.My dear Lady, I have such an experience in literary critic that I can assure you, evev if noone has done it before, that you have a real talent in poesy.Mw, myself, I'm not apoet, in the sense most poets do, I just, knowing which are poets real, I try to form mines in that canon.But out of my knoledge on l.critic, I do assure you YOU ARE A POETESS REAL.

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Savita Tyagi 13 February 2016

Thank you so much Dimitrios. It is such a pleasure to read your comment. I am truly honored. There is so much to learn for me but each step forward has been a joy.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 November 2013

Race is on Time floats I am a moment With in a moment lovely fantastic ma'am thank to share

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