Flash Thought Iv (Ritam - Rhythm) Poem by Savita Tyagi

Flash Thought Iv (Ritam - Rhythm)

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Cooperation!
Domination!
Friction!
How is this vast
Universe managed!

From brevity to elaboration
Runs a mechanism in precision!
A perfect rhythm
Encompassing imperfection!

An absolute extends in division!
Part or whole!
Hidden!
Visible!
Mesmerizing!
Terrorizing!
Loving!
Amazing!

Wednesday, April 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: universe
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Note: Ritam is a Sanskrit word used to describe the cosmic order often translated as rhythm but it means much more than that. It indicated one supreme power as well as many other forces of universe working in harmony.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

It is that ritam that keeps this world moving. Beautifully explained.

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Savita Tyagi 04 May 2017

Thank you dear Valsa for your comment.

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Valsa George 02 May 2017

So many forces work in harmony to sustain the cosmic order. Sometimes there can be friction leading to disharmony! A deep philosophical vision finely put!

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 28 April 2017

The book 'Tao of Physics' speaks us of the dance of Lord Siv in every atom.A vision of Indian Philosophy.Sound poem..

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Savita Tyagi 28 April 2017

Thank you so much for your comment. I don't have much knowledge of science but studying more of my religion pulls me to reading articles of quantum physics too shedding light on consciousness research. It really brings together for me science and spirituality in a fascinating way.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 April 2017

Universe is very well managed by cooperation. A mechanism in precision, a perfect rhythm runs in brevity. Both mechanism and rhythm memorizes about loving art of universe. Very thoughtful and amazing poem is shared with nice imagery....10

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Savita Tyagi 27 April 2017

Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment.

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