! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ****florence Of Beauty****! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ****florence Of Beauty****! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 4.8


Florence of beauty tunes through the joy
Art of blue jingles fledging distant sky silhouetted
what a lone muse intones along moon stuck lily
new born dream expires sprucing the grace of love

oh what a glaze of whisper by cry of innocence
as redeemed beam of moon falling on silence
yet unflinches, basking in promises of ocean
heart revels up running on rungs sultry wishes

what a voices piercing through echo of conch shell
drumming on cochlea redounds stunning of resonance
oh what a thrills thrumming all through the green
the whole entirety entices bestowing from heaven
yet silky passion assuaged by winds from the musk

oh what a virile fragrance diffuses through dream
as songs of joy ripples across garden of heaven
eyes yet croons up with hope of vernal tomorrow
smile lies back beneath half muffled veil of exuberance

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 08 February 2009

D efinitely a genius write r eckons intelligence which only a few got!

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Lynda Robson 09 February 2009

Great imagery and flow to this piece, well done 10 Lynda xx

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James Roberts 10 February 2009

I really enjoyed this one great imagery and use of metaphore jim

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Shannon ... 11 February 2009

Very lyrical! Thank you for sharing.10+

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Terry B 12 February 2009

What a beautiful poem, excellent. Imagery is just awesome.

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Gargi Saha 24 May 2009

A lovely poem. Love & hugs..........u get 10++++++

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Susan Jarvis 09 May 2009

So jam-packed full of elaborate expression, my eyes are rolling and my head is reeling! S :)

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Ruth Walters 09 May 2009

So blue is the sky like the sweet hue of his eyes wistfully watching. There you see, you've brought me to verse..... Ruthy : -)

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what a beautiful way of writing and what a beautiful green lands with music sound in it's background...10+++++

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Maya Hershey 14 April 2009

its interesting... it seems like you have really been looking at a kind of perfect sight of nature, blue sky fresh wind..... i enjoyed reading it..nice description... bring up the good work! !

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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