! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***what Yet Untold***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***what Yet Untold***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 5.0


what yet untold is soliloquy of unwritten words
listlessly hidden in furrows of lone silence
thunder may not wake from rock of bed
gleams of light shines by pindar of stone

shadow seems to dance beneath tree leafless
art of silence reasons to flecks of falling snow
yet buried beneath deep oblivion engrossed
love stays away to delve truth unspelt

moon hides beyond the shadow of clouds
beauty resolves to glow by sorrow intoned
hours if night serenades by setting of sun
blue never weeps by whispers of rainbow

sky is torn by the dappled blue spumes
light when lies low by mystery of black
pain when painless gleaning tears
let night remember moment by etching of sorrow

silence tolls the web of sadness
horizon silhouettes by alienation
spring never raves up in stormy rain
earth fails to kiss by fear of insinuation

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh T A 14 August 2009

Deep hidden truth lies as an open secret in your poem! Nice to read!

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Carol Gall 14 August 2009

your words flow in beauty 10

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wow....... a beautiful flow of words...... lovely.

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Marieta Maglas 15 August 2009

wonderful visual metaphors ''shadow seems to dance beneath tree leafless art of silence reasons to flecks of falling snow'' well embedded into this wonderful metaphoric and symbolistical poem...thank you for sharing..10+++++

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Michelle Kafka 15 August 2009

Incredible imagery. Thanks for sharing.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 23 April 2010

‘…love stays away to delve truth unspelt …’ A profound thought with many connotations … To my littler understanding love stays away = stays ‘engrossed’ to ‘delve’ = dive deep into truth unspelt = make it eloquent or get merged. Dada your plucking and wreathing is magnificent and masterly Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Maria Barbara Korynt 25 August 2009

Your poem is very interesting.My life experience is suggesting me, that people very much often, more prefer themselves to feed on the lie, than to find the truth. Therefore what seems deeply hidden for us, is not having to be it. However, power insynuacji it can be very large and for it effects are different - good, and not necessarily. It is possible to undress this beautiful poem to elements, from which it is possible to conjure new stories up. I like it very much...symbols and metaphors are your strong point.(10 v.) Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt

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Swatimalya Chattopadhyay 25 August 2009

Subhendu, I have always felt you are a great dreamer and align yourself completely to the attributes of nature.You extend yourself beyond the framework of what anybody sees and bring out superb imageries. But the poem does not limit to description of nature only, at the back of the poem always a deep meaning gets carried forward, which reflects reality. To me this poem is one of your top world class poems.

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Vaibhav Pandey 23 August 2009

wonderful metaphors in this exceptionally well worded write...so beautiful..10

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Winnie Angel 23 August 2009

untold yet ya made the message quite clear......a powerful way of expressing things which are difficult to express in words alone! .....Winnie

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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