poet Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ****florence Of Beauty****! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Florence of beauty tunes through the joy
Art of blue jingles fledging distant sky silhouetted
what a lone muse intones along moon stuck lily
new born dream expires sprucing the grace of love

oh what a glaze of whisper by cry of innocence
as redeemed beam of moon falling on silence
yet unflinches, basking in promises of ocean
heart revels up running on rungs sultry wishes

what a voices piercing through echo of conch shell
drumming on cochlea redounds stunning of resonance
oh what a thrills thrumming all through the green
the whole entirety entices bestowing from heaven
yet silky passion assuaged by winds from the musk

oh what a virile fragrance diffuses through dream
as songs of joy ripples across garden of heaven
eyes yet croons up with hope of vernal tomorrow
smile lies back beneath half muffled veil of exuberance

Poem Submitted: Monday, January 26, 2009
Poem Edited: Monday, January 26, 2009

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  • Gargi Saha (5/24/2009 1:15:00 PM)

    A lovely poem. Love & hugs..........u get 10++++++

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  • Susan JarvisSusan Jarvis (5/9/2009 2:33:00 PM)

    So jam-packed full of elaborate expression, my eyes are rolling and my head is reeling! S :)

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  • Ruth Walters (5/9/2009 2:25:00 PM)

    So blue is the sky
    like the sweet hue of his eyes
    wistfully watching.

    There you see, you've brought me to verse.....

    Ruthy : -)

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  • Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate (5/4/2009 9:30:00 AM)

    what a beautiful way of writing and what a beautiful green lands with music sound in it's background...10+++++

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  • Maya Hershey (4/14/2009 9:56:00 AM)

    its interesting... it seems like you have really been looking at a kind of perfect sight of nature, blue sky fresh wind..... i enjoyed reading it..nice description... bring up the good work! !

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  • Randy Hogan (2/20/2009 1:36:00 PM)

    pure energy...the electricity shines in your poem....

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  • Alicia Maestri (2/20/2009 11:13:00 AM)

    Ravenously seductive.

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  • Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (2/18/2009 4:04:00 PM)

    A great mystery sometimes revealing and teasing and other times so deep it's difficult to penetrate the truth in front of us.Very lovely.Gave you a ten.Please read my RAINBOW IN MOTION HAIKUS if you have a chance-comments and voting are welcomed...thanks.

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  • Maria Barbara Korynt (2/18/2009 3:12:00 PM)

    Poem rich, full of the smell, the smiles, green, and all additions embellishing the entire description. It is pleasantly reading. The author is knowing the topic very well and he knows what wants to hand over.

    '...a lone muse intones along moon stuck lily
    new born dream expires sprucing the grace of love...'

    '...the whole entirety entices bestowing from heaven
    yet silky passion assuaged by winds from the musk...'

    '...as songs of joy ripples across garden of heaven
    eyes yet croons up with hope of vernal tomorrow...'

    Beatiful fragments and the beautiful poetry to whom it is worthwhile returning.

    Thank you :) Maria Barbara Korynt

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  • Juan Carlos Abeti (2/18/2009 11:37:00 AM)

    this one ever better, very eloquent, good use of words, is a privilege to read your work, thanks.

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  • Terry B (2/12/2009 7:11:00 PM)

    What a beautiful poem, excellent. Imagery is just awesome.

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  • Shannon ... (2/11/2009 2:28:00 PM)

    Very lyrical! Thank you for sharing.10+

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  • James Roberts (2/10/2009 4:02:00 AM)

    I really enjoyed this one great imagery and use of metaphore
    jim

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  • Lynda Robson (2/9/2009 4:01:00 AM)

    Great imagery and flow to this piece, well done
    10
    Lynda xx

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  • Marvin Brato (2/8/2009 10:08:00 PM)

    D efinitely a genius write
    r eckons intelligence which only a few got!

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  • Michael P. JohnsonMichael P. Johnson (2/8/2009 3:25:00 PM)

    Beautiful! But because of swollen words the masses will cast it aside failing to understand....which because of your great talent is a great pity

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  • Ruby Heart (2/7/2009 9:27:00 PM)

    each word have some meaning in them, very nice on how you put togather it. beautiful!

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  • Alison Cassidy (2/7/2009 6:27:00 PM)

    You take a hatful of words (carefully chosen) and scatter them, like confetti, across the page. The result is a collage of images, both visual, aural, and emotional that lingers in the mind's eye. Florence is your inspiration - the poem is distinctly yours. Beautiful. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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  • Moushumi moushumi (2/7/2009 7:10:00 AM)

    All the words in this poem mused in my ear all the time & literally silhouetted in the pages where i treasure.10+

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  • Eyan Desir (2/7/2009 4:33:00 AM)

    Thoughtful, very well written, ..........nice poem.....

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