Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 191,133 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Flying In Flight - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Learning the art of flying now ready,
We are now flying in flight of steady.
We have entered inside an aeroplane,
To fix off the belt hostess does explain.

The vehicle has started running now,
We shall move soon to capital in vow.
How will it land there we are thinking,
Time to time with God we are linking.

The flight has taken to go up the turn,
It has started flying from land upturn.
Concern is going to watch the new city,
We are on call of father to meet, no pity.

Soon we shall be in Delhi after an hour,
Then again at morning will fly in power.
Flower we shall offer father with due love,
We are flying as eagerly flies in sky dove

We shall reach to Mount Abu by a train,
Father of heaven will wash out our pain.
Rain of boon drop by drop he does of light,
To meet father again we are flying in flight.

Topic(s) of this poem: journey


Poet's Notes about The Poem

“Now we are ready after learning the art of flying. In steady flight now we are flying. Already we have entered inside an aeroplane. Hostess explains to fix off the belt. Vehicle has started running now. In vow we shall move to capital soon. We are thinking that how will it land. We are linking with God time to time. To go up that flight has already taken the turn. From land taking upturn it has already started flying. To watch the new city new discussion with little anxiety is going on. We do not have any confusion or any clumsy situation in mind. To meet father we are on a call. After an hour we shall be in Delhi soon. In power at morning we shall fly again. With due love, we shall offer flower to father. We are fling like an eager dove flies. By a train we shall reach to Mount Abu. Of course father of heaven will wash out our pain. Drop by drop he does the boon of light for us. Again to meet father we are flying in flight. This poem is based on such theme.” This is written on occasion of special journey from Bhubaneswar to Ahmadabad via Delhi, on this day of 11, March 2015 and dedicated to the people of the world.

Comments about Flying In Flight by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/12/2016 4:25:00 PM)

    Feedback received
    picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡
    x........fantastic ink! ! ! ..i would love to fly an airplane....would love to have some company on the plane...any volunteers? ★
    11 Mar 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply

    picture of senthil nathan
    xPoem of flying colours...great sir.
    11 Mar 2015 by senthil nathan | Reply

    picture of Utpal Moran
    xNice with flying emotions...
    11 Mar 2015 by Utpal Moran | Reply
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  • Uma Ram (3/14/2016 8:08:00 AM)


    Beautiful detail of the exotic experience sir. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (3/18/2015 11:39:00 AM)


    With great detail you have captured the unique experience that is flying so beautifully! (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (3/14/2015 10:01:00 AM)


    Flying has become a routine thing today. Everyone in the flight is delighted when it lands. Beautiful poem describing a flight in neat detail. (Report) Reply

  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (3/13/2015 7:15:00 AM)


    At Delhi, the Father Of the Nation at Rajghat, At Mount Abu, the Father Of the Universe (in nature) . Lovely. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 11, 2015



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