Once the vine from above
Mixed with the seeds of love
Desires turned to envy
Envy spat jealousy
Whiter than light
Turned dark as night
Foolish humans! beware
My anger fills lakes
Hearts, I must break
Blood fills my plate
Your life is at stake
Fool! I'm called hate.
Virtuous like a lamb
Brighter than light
sadness will disapear
Laughter will be near
Loneliness will be warm
Hearts will be one
Softer than a feather
Sweet and tender
Innocent like a dove
Are the wings of love.
The sperms of Satan
Fuel with his rage
Versus the branch of God
Wrapped in human lives
Only the sands of time
Tell who wins our heart?
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I found this poem different everytime I read it four times to be precise. I didn't find repetition, quite the opposite in fact an old piece for the present time. Regards. Craig.
excellent simile Innocent like a dove Are the wings of love. excellent abstract poem 10++++++++++
wow nice! i felt every verses... but hope the love always reign. have a wonderful yuletide season... bring out the love.
The images in these verses are strong, just like the subjects they depict! Nice poem.
Eyan, this is an outstanding poem, yeah, love versus hate is a very good topic on poetry. nice...
This was an amazing poem...I absolutely loved it. The way you described love and hate...awesome.
Excellent work. It flow nicely and deserve no less than->> 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is absolutely amazing. i haven't read something this good in a long time. you don't have to write modernly for the modern to understand you. but the words you use make it seem like an ancient prophecy being uncovered and shown to the world. a warning to the innocent from a man called hate.10! ! !