* Becoming The Best.....(Inspirational) Poem by Eyan Desir

Hello I read a few of your poems about 4-I really like this one the best-you have a way about you in your writing that I have never felt in reading others work-keep up the good work- Your poems speak about pain and loss in love-you have a lot of passion-keep writing-

excellent spoken like a true poet

Hi Eyan, I like this, its buzzy....... Good choice of words, Gave you a 6...... Ferg

HI Best inspirational poem. Will motivatethe youngers To become the first in life Nice Desir

kepp going with your good job love the poem especially when i started to read at the begging i couldnt stop reading, , what a beautifull poem

simply inspiring... thank you for sharing

this is the stuff you need to be righting, this is my most favoriote poem you have ever written! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! This is the best poem i have read in a long time! ! ! ! ! (10 and way more! ! !)

Eyan, this is a living proof of excellency, well penned like the rest of your poems, keep it up, WISDOM is not a priviledge, it is a gift given to us by GOOD to be share with the rest of the world....Love and Peace,10++++

great poem injoyed reading it....9

Nice Work of Words... I Especially Like The First Stanza... MoonBee