* Becoming The Best.....(Inspirational) Poem by Eyan Desir

* Becoming The Best.....(Inspirational)

Rating: 3.0

When divine order
Wraps gifts in mortals hands
Executing with excellence
Becomes an easy task

Where the fires burn
The oil of ambition
Intensifies its heat

Where perseverance leaks
Practicing will mould
Sweat into sucess

Obsessions to win
Crushes! the opposition
Hard work builds champions

With the touch of an angel
Get ready, steady go!
To behold the process....

Of becoming the best.

Copyright © ®2009, Eyan desir. All rights
Nov 4th 2009..

Pitilosi Mdala 19 November 2009

you're already the best, you know wa? you're strong enough to crush the opposition

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 19 November 2009

As your poem states, it takes ambition, perseverance, and hard work to 'Become the Best' in arousing one's mind, by divine guidance [if ones desire] or self induced or encouragement from others, the outcome is the same. a good write and a 10

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Fay Slimm 19 November 2009

This must surely be inspirational - - it is dripping with first class poetry - - well written from first to last line.....10/10 from Fay.

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Marieta Maglas 19 November 2009

Hard work builds champions wonderful abstract poem 10++++++++++

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Alien Zoo 19 November 2009

Where the fires burn The oil of ambition Intensifies its heat Nice

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Whispering Rose 14 April 2010

simply inspiring... thank you for sharing

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Janell Cressman 14 March 2010

this is the stuff you need to be righting, this is my most favoriote poem you have ever written! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! This is the best poem i have read in a long time! ! ! ! ! (10 and way more! ! !)

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Romeo Della Valle 14 March 2010

Eyan, this is a living proof of excellency, well penned like the rest of your poems, keep it up, WISDOM is not a priviledge, it is a gift given to us by GOOD to be share with the rest of the world....Love and Peace,10++++

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Nic Leisure 24 November 2009

great poem injoyed reading it....9

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Moonbee Canady 22 November 2009

Nice Work of Words... I Especially Like The First Stanza... MoonBee

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