* Becoming The Best.....(Inspirational) Poem by Eyan Desir

* Becoming The Best.....(Inspirational)

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When divine order
Wraps gifts in mortals hands
Executing with excellence
Becomes an easy task

Where the fires burn
The oil of ambition
Intensifies its heat

Where perseverance leaks
Practicing will mould
Sweat into sucess

Obsessions to win
Crushes! the opposition
Hard work builds champions

With the touch of an angel
Get ready, steady go!
To behold the process....

Of becoming the best.

Copyright © ®2009, Eyan desir. All rights
Nov 4th 2009..

Becky Laprarie 21 November 2009

Hello I read a few of your poems about 4-I really like this one the best-you have a way about you in your writing that I have never felt in reading others work-keep up the good work- Your poems speak about pain and loss in love-you have a lot of passion-keep writing-

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Keith Mclennon 20 November 2009

excellent spoken like a true poet

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Fergus Condron 20 November 2009

Hi Eyan, I like this, its buzzy....... Good choice of words, Gave you a 6...... Ferg

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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam 19 November 2009

HI Best inspirational poem. Will motivatethe youngers To become the first in life Nice Desir

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g black black 19 November 2009

kepp going with your good job love the poem especially when i started to read at the begging i couldnt stop reading, , what a beautifull poem

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Whispering Rose 14 April 2010

simply inspiring... thank you for sharing

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Janell Cressman 14 March 2010

this is the stuff you need to be righting, this is my most favoriote poem you have ever written! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! This is the best poem i have read in a long time! ! ! ! ! (10 and way more! ! !)

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Romeo Della Valle 14 March 2010

Eyan, this is a living proof of excellency, well penned like the rest of your poems, keep it up, WISDOM is not a priviledge, it is a gift given to us by GOOD to be share with the rest of the world....Love and Peace,10++++

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Nic Leisure 24 November 2009

great poem injoyed reading it....9

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Moonbee Canady 22 November 2009

Nice Work of Words... I Especially Like The First Stanza... MoonBee

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