* Becoming The Best.....(Inspirational) Poem by Eyan Desir

you're already the best, you know wa? you're strong enough to crush the opposition

As your poem states, it takes ambition, perseverance, and hard work to 'Become the Best' in arousing one's mind, by divine guidance [if ones desire] or self induced or encouragement from others, the outcome is the same. a good write and a 10

This must surely be inspirational - - it is dripping with first class poetry - - well written from first to last line.....10/10 from Fay.

Hard work builds champions wonderful abstract poem 10++++++++++

Where the fires burn The oil of ambition Intensifies its heat Nice

simply inspiring... thank you for sharing

this is the stuff you need to be righting, this is my most favoriote poem you have ever written! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! This is the best poem i have read in a long time! ! ! ! ! (10 and way more! ! !)

Eyan, this is a living proof of excellency, well penned like the rest of your poems, keep it up, WISDOM is not a priviledge, it is a gift given to us by GOOD to be share with the rest of the world....Love and Peace,10++++

great poem injoyed reading it....9

Nice Work of Words... I Especially Like The First Stanza... MoonBee