My rose has walked away
I feel the same, after a new day
I'm fuel by uncontrollable rage
It's frustrating living this life
Angry with myself for falling in
Your juice of unfaithfulness
Turned a sweet loving heart
Blacker than dirty tar!
You spat twisted lies in my life
It was you, that murdered
My ability to love and trust murderer!
Months and years the pain can't subside
Bitter memories are the scars
Impossible to wash away
They haunt by day and comfort at night
Why must hearts fall in love?
If it's not forever
It's a waste of time!
August 2nd 2009
Thank you for reading
nicely written.........sad......maybe u are right about the waste of time thing.......... excellent work
'Why must a heart fall in love? If it's not forever It's a waste of time! ' so sad but unfortunately it happens between now and then...i do agree with you, i don't believe in love if it is not forever love....10 Hataw
Friend, there is nothing waste in life. Some unpleasant events happen only to transform us to something new and hopefully better. Expressive write.
waste of time.....life in itself is waste of time........but a rich content and rich in sense.........nicely written..........
While love can be a many splintered thing, I'm not sure it can ever be a waste of time. Keep the faith! Excellent job and keep of the good work...Jeff.
why must a heart love if it not for ever.....a painful question a painful situation for any one....10
very good and positive thoughts of moving on... very directing write towards forgetting and accepting things though it hurts.. strong title..Waste of time..very true.. crying and wanting over lost love is just crying over spilled milk..'why cry? ' strong message for those who are heart broken i love this, my friend.. 10+++ lovelots, Maia
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
you are right...why waste your time in waiting and remembering those past of yours...hmmmm..try to forget, let the past be the lesson for today and the future... your poem is nicely done..