For Perfection-Reaction Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

For Perfection-Reaction

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For perfection-Reaction
Monday,20th April 2020

human beings have been brought on earth with imperfection
had it been the purpose of perfection!
God might have not put the evil friends inside
and afforded the leniency of providing freedom

perfection can never be the reality
of course, there can be improvement in quality
science and technology has near perfection
with daily induction of the precision

person can claim to be noble
and act as good individual
but purity of an action remains in doubt
so it is not much talked about

perfection is wanted but not desired
bad elements are warned but good behavior is admired
in any field, perfection is brought to near precision
but system can't be claimed to have perfection

even nature is imperfect
even though very kind in acts
perfection is praised
but not literally chased

Hasmukh Mehta

For Perfection-Reaction
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 22 April 2020

human beings have been brought on earth with imperfection had it been the purpose of perfection! God might have not put the evil friends inside and afforded the leniency of providing freedom..... fantastic beginning with nice theme. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being chosen this poem as the member poem of the poem of the day.

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Hypocrite''s Are Us 22 April 2020

I bet you say that to all the boys.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 April 2020

For perfection-Reaction Monday,20th April 2020 human beings have been brought on earth with imperfection had it been the purpose of perfection! ..............................What a lovely start of the poem that is chosen TODAY as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hooray! CONGRATULATIONS, Hasmukh Sir. ONLY I do not know what you meant with: " science and technology has near perfection" . Must this not be in the plural " have" ? Thank you!

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Chealsey Marou 22 April 2020

Rather than every month, your poems should be featured every second day. This will show readers how unbiased the administration is.

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Marker 22 April 2020

I give this 0. Should be deleted.

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Rat Brain 22 April 2020

#156 on top poets what a joke site. Why would anyone want to play here?

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i reached to 77 even

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 April 2020

perfection can never be the reality of course, there can be improvement in quality science and technology has near perfection with daily induction of the precision.. Thinking of perfection. very good poem. tony

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Catherine Habbie 22 April 2020

Congratulations on being vselecse as the poet of the day. A beautiful poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 April 2020

perfection is praised but not literally chased// yeah exactly; right you are Sir; congrats; always 10+

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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