For perfection-Reaction
Monday,20th April 2020
human beings have been brought on earth with imperfection
had it been the purpose of perfection!
God might have not put the evil friends inside
and afforded the leniency of providing freedom
perfection can never be the reality
of course, there can be improvement in quality
science and technology has near perfection
with daily induction of the precision
person can claim to be noble
and act as good individual
but purity of an action remains in doubt
so it is not much talked about
perfection is wanted but not desired
bad elements are warned but good behavior is admired
in any field, perfection is brought to near precision
but system can't be claimed to have perfection
even nature is imperfect
even though very kind in acts
perfection is praised
but not literally chased
Hasmukh Mehta
For perfection-Reaction Monday,20th April 2020 human beings have been brought on earth with imperfection had it been the purpose of perfection! ..............................What a lovely start of the poem that is chosen TODAY as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hooray! CONGRATULATIONS, Hasmukh Sir. ONLY I do not know what you meant with: " science and technology has near perfection" . Must this not be in the plural " have" ? Thank you!
Rather than every month, your poems should be featured every second day. This will show readers how unbiased the administration is.
#156 on top poets what a joke site. Why would anyone want to play here?
perfection can never be the reality of course, there can be improvement in quality science and technology has near perfection with daily induction of the precision.. Thinking of perfection. very good poem. tony
Congratulations on being vselecse as the poet of the day. A beautiful poem.
perfection is praised but not literally chased// yeah exactly; right you are Sir; congrats; always 10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
human beings have been brought on earth with imperfection had it been the purpose of perfection! God might have not put the evil friends inside and afforded the leniency of providing freedom..... fantastic beginning with nice theme. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being chosen this poem as the member poem of the poem of the day.
I bet you say that to all the boys.