For The Moment Poem by Dee Daffodil

For The Moment

Rating: 5.0


Instead of waiting for our future,
To unfold before my very eyes,
I'll be content to be with you...
For the moment.

And who knows...
Maybe the moments,
Will turn into,
A lifetime.


A poem by Dee Daffodil (H.W 1982)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruby Root 20 September 2006

Hi Dee, I think your right. I think we should take everyday as new day. I keep looking back into the past. It is hard to move on if you do this. I think when you go through things it makes you reflect on everything, I think. I guess it is normal for a while.

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lovely :) simple but elegant, not a word wasted!

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Brian Dorn 04 June 2006

Dee, a realistic thought, ... it's impossible to know what the future will hold, so we have to live for the moment and hope that the moment will last forever. Good write! ! Brian

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Simona Terron 30 May 2006

How nicely said, so much in so few words...a universe of meaning put across so simply, minus all the fluff and so so honest... Nice work Dee!

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DEE... MUCH DELIVERED IN A FEW PROFOUND WORDS...YOUR MANTRA IS COMMENDABLE...ANOTHER CHUTE, IF YOU WILL, OFF THE BRANCH OF THE '' CARPE DEIM '' THEORY...NICE WRITE...& A (10) FOR THE MOMENT! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R. ~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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Greenwolfe 1962 15 August 2008

I used that line one time. The girl said, 'Yea, that's what I'm afraid of.' GW62

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Geraldine Moorkens Byrne 22 March 2007

lovely, elegant and strong.

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Lee Degnan 20 March 2007

Howard Johnson is right! ! Sorry, Mel Brooks fan... I loved this one, awesome... Lee

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Coleen Hayes 12 March 2007

so simply stated, yet absolutely enlightening..Very well written..

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Howard Johnson 18 October 2006

A write doesn't need to be long to be great, lol Dee

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