indira babbellapati

Rookie - 106 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

Forest Mist - Poem by indira babbellapati

the trees extended
into a hazy sky hiding
away part of them
down below a
splash of colors... See More
carefully wrapped
themselves behind
the winter's veil
the stream felt
cold and icy on
my tired feet
where am i in this
enveloping fog?

i fail to find my 'self...'


Comments about Forest Mist by indira babbellapati

  • (6/4/2012 10:08:00 PM)

    in life's haze and mist, one must hold to the compass that charts his path. Good poem, it reminds that we must stay focused. (Report) Reply

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  • (12/22/2009 9:22:00 AM)

    the self that is scattered in the ambience that envelops......
    lovely poem.
    thank you.
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  • Maia Padua (12/21/2009 6:29:00 PM)

    refreshing yet so touching...
    a soul-searching piece...
    thanks for sharing..I love this...


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  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (12/21/2009 8:11:00 AM)

    you are crowned with the last line. shan (Report) Reply

  • C. P. Sharma (12/20/2009 8:11:00 AM)

    Each birth enveloped in the veils of mist
    Leaves hazy image of the gone by days,
    Misty forest of death and birth unfolds
    With time, the life's mysterious ways.
    Stage will be new, the portraits change,
    We myopics are victims visual range.
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  • Sathyanarayana M V S (12/11/2009 2:28:00 AM)

    Was that Ooty? Very well depictd (Report) Reply

  • (12/10/2009 7:18:00 AM)

    Enjoy the show... when you rediscover yourself then you'll emerge far more refreshed. Liked the way you portrayed it. (Report) Reply

  • (12/10/2009 3:41:00 AM)

    it is such a sad thing that we sometimes fail to find ourself and wander in void in some certain moments....wonderful poem! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 10, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 29, 2009

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