Forest Mist Poem by indira babbellapati

Forest Mist

Rating: 3.2


the trees extended
into a hazy sky hiding
away part of them
down below a
splash of colors... See More
carefully wrapped
themselves behind
the winter's veil
the stream felt
cold and icy on
my tired feet
where am i in this
enveloping fog?

i fail to find my 'self...'

09dec2009
14.20hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 10 December 2009

it is such a sad thing that we sometimes fail to find ourself and wander in void in some certain moments....wonderful poem! ! !

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Ranjit Ravindran 10 December 2009

Enjoy the show... when you rediscover yourself then you'll emerge far more refreshed. Liked the way you portrayed it.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 11 December 2009

Was that Ooty? Very well depictd

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Walterrean Salley 04 June 2012

in life's haze and mist, one must hold to the compass that charts his path. Good poem, it reminds that we must stay focused.

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 22 December 2009

the self that is scattered in the ambience that envelops...... lovely poem. thank you.

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Miriam Maia Padua 21 December 2009

refreshing yet so touching... a soul-searching piece... thanks for sharing..I love this... 10++++ Lovelots, Maia

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 21 December 2009

you are crowned with the last line. shan

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C. P. Sharma 20 December 2009

Each birth enveloped in the veils of mist Leaves hazy image of the gone by days, Misty forest of death and birth unfolds With time, the life's mysterious ways. Stage will be new, the portraits change, We myopics are victims visual range. CP

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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