Forever Eighteen Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Forever Eighteen

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My wife just got a tattoo;
It says 'Forever Eighteen'.
I've some very bad news for her:
That age never more will be seen.

Forever Eighteen
Friday, September 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
That's not a picture of my wife, and she didn't really get a tattoo!

written 04 September 2015
Recife, Pernambuco, Brazil
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitava Sur 07 September 2015

Very well said. Truth cannot be hidden at last by any other means

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David Wood 07 September 2015

Lovely quatrain, Oh the things we do to our bodies, I have also seen tattoo's spelt wrongly too!

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Kelly Kurt 05 September 2015

Thank goodness, Kim! : -) Unless she has a good sense of humor.

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Kim Barney

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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