Forgive Poem by Sina Farajzadeh

Forgive

Rating: 4.4


Under rain of words I stand,
Can't even wash my brain or hand,
Full of sins, aware and unaware, it's our brand,
To act bad, to hide truth under sand.

And now all, me, she, we
Are alone, hopeless, can't you see?
Everything's cold, even my tree
Of knowledge which makes me free.

Full with emotins she weeps,
Me too, all we do, no kiss with our lips.
The clothes of wolves are now wore by sheeps
That's why I kill the nights by my sleeps

Forgive me, forgive us, for what we have done,
And we shouldn't, and for what we haven't done,
But we should have done,
Because you're God, and from Truth we can't run
Because about Judgement told us, your Son.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Maybe they are wrong. Maybe! What if they were right? ... Who knows?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nader Baheri 10 September 2012

very beautifull.yes god is all around us.it reminds me one of Frogh Farokhzad's poems. I do not know if it is right to spend our lives behind the sins and forgiveness.but where we can hopelessly cling to is the God. I just wanna say absolutely they are right.only in this case.we must be ourselves. cheers Nader

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Azade J 10 September 2012

Very beautiful. I like it because it reminds me myself.

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Dr Antony Theodore 11 December 2015

Full of sins, aware and unaware, it's our brand, To act bad, to hide truth under sand. Full with emotins she weeps, Forgive me, forgive us, for what we have done, And we shouldn't, and for what we haven't done, and the final prayer God Almighty forgive us. such a penitent plea God will always listen to. thank you for this wonderful prayerful poem on forgiveness. thank you again tony

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Romeo Della Valle 09 September 2012

Powerful and deep! A well crafted and poignant write that clearly shows your great poetic talent and feelings! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Love and peace for always! Romeo-New York City

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Neela Nath Das 09 September 2012

so, rhythmic and heartwarming!

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Chinedu Dike 27 November 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing, Sina.

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A very creative composition! Keep it up!

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The need for forgiveness is here powerfully presented. Such a universal poem with which we can all identify.

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Shanice Rodriguez 22 June 2016

I like this a lot, especially the first four lines! ! Nice poem

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Howard Savage 20 January 2016

Forgive is the most important element of life. Great poem.

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